Webnovel Author: Darwin111111 - Fanfic Collection

A story about comparing an alternate Emiya Shirou to the normal one would be nice... Or actually a mere comparison of the three routes, since you practically can.

Yes... The problem with these stories is that the protagonist simply uses the powerful items immediately without having a well-established goal. I mean, yes, you want to protect the planet, but that's very ambiguous. How much time are you willing to sacrifice and how much do you want to protect the planet? What are you specifically threatening? In these stories the best thing to do is not go from 0 to 100 or too slowly. If you do it slowly, not by showing a standard romance plot that is everywhere, but by putting its goals, but also its difficulties, into perspective. Just watching things happen suddenly, already done, like a building creation loading bar in a game, is boring.

One year

Actually the fanfic is fine. It doesn't have the most original premise, but it's not like fanfics with these premises are very good either. Compared to many others this one, from the little I have seen, can be considered good. The protagonist has a clear goal and things didn't go from 0 to 100 very quickly. There are no decisions made just because without being explored... No sense. And I don't see, on the surface, any flaws in the narrative or some crazy and incredibly unrealistic or stupid decision.

Honestly, it seemed interesting with that Shinji thing, but it became boring when he was teleported to Chaldea and realized that he is not an Isekai. She was interesting in her own way because of the way the protagonist acted. But the point I made about Chaldea, I find it uninteresting. Probably preferences.

It's a very good story. It does not stray away from the world background of Naruto and its protagonist and other characters seem to have a consistent personality. With clear and understandable flow of thought. The author is good. I have read only 10 chapters.

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The idea of ​​shenron sounds interesting if I made it difficult... Let's assume some difficulty explained holy grail version of Fate. I mean, basically a wish-fulfilling monster containing a complicated and sophisticated body to fulfill said function... Maybe similar to Ilya's family... Einsvern or however you spell it. (Translated from Spanish).