tsunamis don't work like that. they are almost unnoticeable when you are on open sea. the large wave forms only near coastline.
"But this path isn't recommended. Even the smallest tsunami is over fifty meters high. Not even an aircraft carrier can survive that. Do you think your little boat stands a chance? Unless you're unbelievably lucky, you're just buying time before the end."
Samsara Tower: Only I Know the Plot!
ภาพยนตร์ · IamNoob
Man this fic is good. Not the best I've ever read, but good enough for me to remember what its about even after reading dozen other stories and waiting longer periods of time for chapter. I often judge stories by how well I remember what happened in the story after I get back to it after a long time, because that's where I find enjoyment in reading. I don't enjoy reading same thing written differently over and over again. I want new things and experiences. And that's what this fic gives me. It has it's own unique things with a few cliche ones woven into it to make just the right mixture of interesting novel that basically reads itself. Its not masterclass of writing. But its compelling enough for me to read it every time new chapter drops. though I don't understand how it has only few reviews and few stones. Is it perhaps shadowbanned or something? I've been reading fics for years I saw much worse fics in every aspect shot into the top ranks. But this great fic remains hidden for some reason. Anyway great work author. I hope you keep writing it and find it fun and enjoyable to write your story, since that's the most important thing in writing. If you don't like writing the story yourself it will reflect on the story and eventually you will inevitably drop it as most authors of fanfiction do. So that's why I hope you will write what you like and find enjoyable to write about without much care about audience and readers, though I understand that's sometimes not good idea if you want to be author for living. Good Luck.
Honestly, I read first few chapters and if that is supposed to be the better rewritten version of that author's fic, I have to question your taste and understanding of what makes a good story and how it should be told because that thing can barley qualify even for webnovel's poor standards. No wonder it got no visibility when its so bad in the first place.
I always wondered, if the goblet is so powerful and you can submit anyone's name why don't they submit voldemort's name and he would have to participate or lose magic. Problem solved. Or you could easily use it for assassinating people, just submit their names, don't let them know they were selected and when they don't show up they lose magic.
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Nice flex 900 H100 that's quite a lot of money under your control right there.
Now I am handling an 900x H100 GPU cluster to get this model ready since last night, And man, this cluster setup is so fucking clunky, like how tf does 72000 GB of VRAM is giving me out of memory error is beyond me...
Star Wars Rebels: A Gray Tale
ภาพยนตร์ · Abstracto
I don't care if someone uses AI to help them write their story. It can have very positive impact if used correctly. But that is clearly not the case here. If the author read what he posts at least once before posting it it could be at least 2x better. There are so many annoying things like repeating what was said multiple times. Characters forgetting what they said previously. Characters forgetting what happened in the past. Dialogues that don't make sense for that character to say that or know that. Like Logan saying it wouldn't be first time since someone destroyed training room when he literally just can to the school for the first time a few days ago. There are so many of them it just breaks immersion. And I would rather not talk at all at to plot development. That is whole another hole to dig into but let's just say there isn't much thought behind what is happening in the story.
An ability like that can be worse than death. Imagine your enemy can't kill you so instead they destroy everyone and everything beside you. every atom, electron, photon, everything in the universe. you'd remain there alone floating in nothing for eternity. That's just worse than death.
Storm nodded. "Exactly. Someone like me can keep you locked in place with enough pressure. And that's just elemental powers. There's also magic, psychic abilities, and more out there that could seal you away."
Rise of an Immortal
ภาพยนตร์ · Kakarot1809
Damn I wish I was here before the chapter was edited. As for the people who cry about smut what are you bunch doing reading fic marked with r18 tag. as for those complaining about four arms first of all are you racist? its still Ben just in different form, would you also complain if the role was reversed and Ben was bedding some hot alien girl? second of all you are too innocent for the internet, you probably never heard of rule34 even, its ben10 fic. Its as if you read mlp fic and complain about there being horses.
Kinda lame ngl. I was expecting development for Jane since he bonded with her. It was unfortunate that instead of finding a way to make story for her you just took an easy way out and discarded her character. But I understand you were ambitious and didn't have a clear picture when you started writing. you eagerly developed too many storylines and adding more would be too hard to manage. especially since you are writing this story as one mc only where most chapters has to be from mc's pov. It would be more interesting story if each character held same importance. But that's something even authors like George Martin struggles with. And I doubt webnovel audience would like it. Even now you managed those storylines only because the time difference sheningans you are doing and setting of the story where mc have multiple bodies. So I can't really fault you, but it still leaves bad taste for me after reading this chapter. It makes Mc more dislikeable as a character to read about.
Great story, I've been following it on ao3 for some time now and I haven't been disappointed. Keep up the good work dear author. But I'm just curious what happened to your ao3 account. Did they ban your works? I know they have quite loose rules, you can write basically anything. They have just one rule and that is you can't put there links for monetization. So if you did I don't remember. You could instead put there link to discord or something and monetization site would be somewhere there.
HP x DxD: That's not Wizard Magic!
หนังสือและวรรณกรรม · StarWaves