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the writing quality isn't all that but it is enjoyable to read and to see what comes next. Its pretty chill. llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

boi you retarded. my boi got lost in the sause

It's really good and definitely worth reading, Some of the mcs actions are dumb and I see the results from a mile away also the power progression is quite slow but I will say you stop caring cuz the comedy makes the slowness good news that there are a lot more chapters to come BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Started pretty good; the mc is a regular guy, not that smart, pretty funny, has a somewhat annoying friend companion (voice in head) with depth, plot armour is a lot but he has to 'cut off his arm' for it to work, good funny interactions with side characters, smart characters, depth. Now pretty bad; the mc is a prodigy among gods, becomes Kim Jong-un, insanely "smart", not funny, friend companion turned into nothing more than a yandere or a shovel that says it loves him, he continues to collect voices in his head that are more annoying and have only above surface emotions aka more shovels, no interactions with side characters, side characters IQ are in the 50s, Plot armour is insane as in the universe flips when he breaths. no depth and plot holes

like Kim Jong-un with humour

*If you don't like the comedy style you will not like this and if you're tired of cliches this is a good try* Really good tho the jokes become too much sometimes when simple things are dragged to a whole chapter. The power system combination with the cheat is really good and interesting. Also, the comedy brings an element of randomness allowing the author to sometimes break cliches and predictability. Most of the comedy is alright, some are terrible and some are really funny aka I laughed out loud. Do I wish there was less? yes but sometimes i want to read something that challenges my tastes.

*if you watch two people fucking while you're in the corner(watching porn) but aren't too high on copium to realise what you are doing

WARNING: THIS NOVEL IS NOT FOR BETA MALES This is the best sex light novel I have ever read BY FAR. Usually, these novels become super boring super quick as they don't really have verity but this is very different. The interactions are unique (at first at least), different and fleshed out. IF YOU LIKE SEX NOVELS THIS IS A MUST-TRY. (spoilers below) What I don't like: he can't get anyone pregnant which took out all the danger or mystery of where the novel would go, towards the end most of the women become reliant on him making it like every sex novel, the author losses the depravity over time, the power system is not blended at all and has no real effect on the story. I don't like most of these novels because their too invested in power but the author still should have done more. The ability is useless to the mc as he has almost no use for it (could change)

very good novel, good humour, nice side characters(exept 3), mc has actually real and likeable motivation aka not one of those "i will sit down for 1000 years for a chance at immortality", the mc is a real person and not copy and paste with a dumb rule that came out their bum like "say good morning and i will risk my like for you. look at me wrong and i will shoot myself in the foot to skin you alive". Tho it has the curse of reverend insanity, arc 1: survive calamity, arc 2: survive calamity, arc 3: survive calamity, arc 4: survive calamity, arc 5: survive calamity. I see it a lot when mcs become untouchable with time so the author has to constantly bring in threats. Also, the author HARDCORE tries to avoid 'am in super danger luckily I have a list of cool skill mutation options to help' so it ends up like "am in super danger I have list of cool skill mutation of unknown options but I REFUSE to even look at them because I may be tempted, let me chose something that has a little chance of helping or reading all the options is boring” which is frustrating but funny. Summary: Anthony is reborn as an ant T-T read the damn novel

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new troupe??? lol. there are a bunch of stories like this (I have seen more than 15) but they're usually slow paste so they don't get rated well and you don't see them.

(would rate lower) These are always weird, they try to grapple too much. Like they have: a lot of interactions must be lude, all future events must be explained cuz you're a regressor, the field of your class must be explained because of how unique it is (economics), the family system must be constantly explained because of the mc background. The power system must be explained, school, etc. I am 4 and a half HOURS in and the mc has done almost NOTHING and we are only on the THIRD day. Events: aptitude test and got a maid, won a house, a business and two maids because of the aptitude test, went to house and business

low dimensional game. I think its the first world-building light novel also its not a game

It's alright and am mostly reading for the premise but be warned it's one of those girls on top and when a boy has power he is insane or has a female vice commander. Each character is overly dramatic or always quirky (the cliche of avoiding all cliches). The story spends a little bit too much time on nothing. He is too OP to the point where you're watching hacked modded Minecraft in creative mode, it could have been better if he had to struggle to do stuff. One other thing, the writer talks about topics repetitively when he can just explain them properly once. Like in this world the author repeats over and over that men and women are exactly alike because of magic but never explains why women are not disadvantaged during childbirth in the caveman era. plus it makes no sense for his memories to produce a daughter.

Its very DARK be warned, if some things don't make sense they will be explained. There are twists and turns and is a lot of fun. BUT like 200 chapters in the author realised that the mc's power becomes super op over time so he decides to reduce the mc's IQ. Before it was about "I am going to die if I don't cultivate super fast" but now its about "I can live 1000s of years and be safe BUT f that am going to call myself god under the heavens in from of people that can 1 hit kill". he becomes as dumb as a rock also these were said 5 chapter apart "i don't have time to waste" (he is talking about 5 sec here)"i have all the time in the world"

"hopefully mc is able to reproduce" what??

the logic is retarded people the mc would kill: will not fight off tigers barehanded to save random people. the mc: will not shoot the tiger with the ak-47, allowing the tiger to kill a bunch of 8-year-olds because he wants to look good saving the rest. BUT HE WILL REMEMBER YOU CHILD THAT IS BEING EATEN ALIVE(he will not) the mc is the biggest piece of shit and will enslave you before he even thinks about saving you. I accepted this but his hypocrisy is too much. It is like the author is writing about how noble a mass child rapist is when he killed his victims' strict parents.

that is what he said

Is there something wrong with me for wanting the mc to have a male companion? like out of 100s of novels there are like 10 non-female friends. The mc talks to himself too much. like he will give a 300-word essay on lone wolf bad and community good. It also has the " if I kill I will turn into a brainless been" which makes no sense. His body does not affect his mind so why does it matter(I wish it did. tree of aeon does it super well). Also, 80% of the story is him talking to himself and 60% out of 80% is filler aka nothing or things you know (the pov might add to it) Literally, no effort has been put into the power system and is boring but that can change (highly unlikely).

boring tbh. There is nationalism but it does not make sense and it feels like an excuse more than a theme. Like the most he can say about his country is 'no human alive can understand caring about the weak' what da?, look at these locally made items and our food taste good. I have the taste for nationalism as it can make novels unique when any effort is put into it. Like black castle was brilliant. I hate it when the novel does not say it with its chest, don’t be like "oh white people randomly have the worst tech in the book I just made up" just say you think your race’s mind is better or give them weak brains. Theory: once there is a mastiff in a story its going to be bad