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Moments 2207
Not to mention the mind corruption or whatever that forces her/him to enjoy the acts against their will like I said Agency is important for the MC of a fic to feel compelling or worthwhile to read this one misses the mark by a mile so far
ch 10 Mental Instability
Wench of Nirn
Video Games · Evoxius
Think I'm gonna skip out on this the smut is decent but I have no care for slave MC's it's completely and utterly pointless for a fic to be made around a enslaved MC there's no agency or proper direction no room for growth or change think yeah not for me
ch 10 Mental Instability
Wench of Nirn
Video Games · Evoxius
New chapter!!! So Lord if The Rings noice!
ch 48 The Healing Light of Rivendell
Elder Scrolls True Daughter of Skyrim
Video Games · Iros
Oh it's gonna be one of those ficss yeah nah this trash heap is gonna be utter garbage not gonna waste time with braindead needleessly OP MC the trope is just stupid and over done ruins any interest the fic would have had otherwise oh well you got me to read a bit but thos nah it's just idiotic and needless
'Hmmm, let's change my race first.' He began to conjure ingredients and began to make potion since it doesn't have any limits and decided to create even more CYOA essence for his entertainment.
DC: Hunting for Beauty.
Anime & Comics · Try_hard
Unlike Mainline Devil May Cry where Dante and Vergil are Human/Demon Hybrids DMC Dante which is this one is a Nephilim which on most text and definitions is that they are a Angel/Demon Hybrid which is this case or they are a Human/Angel Hybrid while on a related and interesting but not relevant note Half Demon/Humans Hybrid's are called Cambion's and are generally exclusively the Children of Incubus's or Succubus's and a Human though some stories have exceptions to the S*x Demon's being the only progenitors of Cambion's like Pit Fiend's and technically Minos from Greek/Roman (don't remember which atm) is a Cambion if we equate him to a Judeochristian religion equivalent
ch 104 Chapter 103
In Marvel As Dante
Movies · RaedaX_1
? It's Pokemon Physics what's the problem ?
Still in his slide, Prinplup starts gathering the flying energy necessary for the attack that defies human understanding of physics.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
I know read a few that's much worse more than I care to admit some just outright bad end after bad end repetitivly but railroading is railroading regardless of severity
Shin shrugged. "We'll see how you feel when you're bleeding out through every orifice, with an eldritch god closing. You'll take my downgraded deal and love it."
In Marvel As Dante
Movies · RaedaX_1
Regrettably apparently
Gastly stayed in her chair as everything happened, "[I just want one normal vacation day, is that too much to ask?]"
Pokemon: Radical Redux
Anime & Comics · Katsu39
Ok just got to put this out there but if railroading keeps being a prevelant them for this fic I'm just gonna go love the idea but can't stand constant railroading and BS the characters don't feel like actual characters as is just like test dummies thrown from one fight to another with nothing of interest really going on outside of fight after fight after fight... it's getting repetitive and boring really hope something happens that's actually interesting sooner than later as is it's more of a comp of fight scenes than an actual flushed fanfiction
Shin shrugged. "We'll see how you feel when you're bleeding out through every orifice, with an eldritch god closing. You'll take my downgraded deal and love it."
In Marvel As Dante
Movies · RaedaX_1
The whole Gengar arcs are boring af like seriously this filler just gas no interesting buts to it just Gengar being a aggravating pr*ck instead of focusing in his objectives half the time now I remember why I stopped reading this for a while too much POV swappinng and boring useless chaptersmlime these last 2-3
He did mess around with some cipher members, but he soon got bored and decided to return to Julian and left back to Alola.
Journey Towards Greatness
Anime & Comics · Evil_God_ZARAKH
Bro's got entire Warhammer mortariums he's filled himself from the bodies he'a dropped conquering planets in his early years.... honestly he's probably killed as many or more than even Frieza because Grieza is kinda picky when he kills either it's a random goon or a species whose offended him it just seems nonchalant because he genuinely doesn't care
"You're not a destroyer, you're not a tyrant, and you're not a killer." She says. "All the transformation does is make you more you. So just think of the yourself right now, only a little bit more blunt. If that's even possible."
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
... sauce?
Thanks for the chapfers
AN: Still alive. Not dropped. Stockpiling took some time. I'll try to upload more chs starting next month. Right now, expect 2 - 3 chs/week starting Monday.
Shattered Dimensions: Marvel x DC
Anime & Comics · UnknownMaster
People are gonna cry about this but I'm all for it finally a author with the b@lls to write Yuri between harem members so many insecure brats on WN on this subject
4) Yuri/Lesbian [Completely different scenes unrelated to MC.]
Shattered Dimensions: Marvel x DC
Anime & Comics · UnknownMaster
The last one is highly debatable just don't let her find out his body count it's more than likely in the tens of millions considering the planets he's wiped clean of the population
"You're not a destroyer, you're not a tyrant, and you're not a killer." She says. "All the transformation does is make you more you. So just think of the yourself right now, only a little bit more blunt. If that's even possible."
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Honestly my only negative's with this fic is the lack of power the MC has and the constant railroading but otherwise awesome fic hope at least one if the 2 change sooner than later it is getting a bit boring reading the MC constantly getting put into a bad situation just 1 after the other can't lie it's starting to feel repetitive especially since the pacing is somewhat slow think I might put this fic on hold for a bit and let 10-20 chapters stockpile outside if all that the fic is good great premise good ideas just feel like the MC is greatly lacking compared to the world around her with all the mentioned things let's be honest her surviving the ambush was complete plot armor and forced she was completely and utterly outclassed and if she didn't get lucky she would have been the one likely dead she just feels so meh even her maid whose hardly relevant recently is more interesting at the moment than her
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The Villainess Returns with a System
Fantasy · El_Don
I was going to go with a few buddies but work called and offered me double pay for the weekend and I'm a sucker for punishment got to start my car fund some how lol
(Author's Note: Hey everyone! I'm putting an up to date picture of what Silvantus looks like in the chapter comments of this post. I'm posting this chapter early because I don't trust the auto post feature and I'll be gone this weekend on a trip to my first ever LARP event. Called the Reckoning, in London, Kentucky. I know it's a long shot, but if any of you are also there, I'll be going by the name Ashraf Azmi with the Suzak Mar Culture/Faction. I wish you all a wonderful Memorial Day weekend, for those who celebrate!)
Isekai From Hell: Modded Skyrim
Video Games · Lemon_Square
Ah ok so it's one of those fics....
"The kind that, a) wasn't meant to attack or hurt you in any way, and b the kind that you're supposed to answer without doing Shakespeare, Mom." Rex replied.
DxD: A World Where T*tties Defy Gravity
Anime & Comics · Orael
Really hope the Hulk serum or Super Soldier serum idea get's forgotten the MC already has a defined powerset and skills no need to muddle things and ruin the fic by adding new abilities and powers willy nully and overinflating powerset's it's pointless and just poor design honestly this fic was ok not great with the constant non stop meat grinder but now eh honestly don't think I can give this fic higher than a 2/5 now that more and more powers are just gonna be thrown the MC's way despite his failire to tap into his current power set completely just a needless distraction think this is where I'm gonna hop of the train was good while it lasted but yeah not my thing
ch 107 Chapter 106
In Marvel As Dante
Movies · RaedaX_1