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The storyline is not bad. A lead Female with many hidden identities and talents a lead male whom fills in the personality gaps of the female lead and 2 children that add comedic moments is why I keep reading. However, the long winded misunderstood interactions is overwhelming with all the characters. There is so much of it in the plot line that as a reader I've become desensitized. I've become annoyed with the personality of the lead female The Author tends to make the reader not to want to root for her the lead female. FL gets more and more distant as the chapter's progress; you get more frustrated at the obvious last minute changes to stop the truth from being revealed everytime and FL non chalant response to it all. Fine FL, just get slapped down instead. It would be more interesting at this point. The author is talented but this story made me more annoyed at the FL then actually root for her.

So far it's a good read, I have no complaints. Character and plot development is interesting. MC is not overly OP even with the systems aide, which leaves room for him to grow. This has serious potential.