Collin_Brasfield

The way that the humans also talk like robots (saying entering low power mode instead of going to sleep) is a dead giveaway that is was either written by AI or translated by AI. That isn't so bad, but the lack of any editing becomes increasingly clear the more you read.

its less the chakra nature's and more of not really showing how they actually integrate into the overarching power he set out to master. Like since the water training we haven't actually seen how it helped his crystal release develop. Or with the yang release training currently it would have been nice to see him make crystal constructs, just something to show that what he is doing matters and ties into his chosen path so it doesn't feel like sidequests to become the next Sage of 6 Paths.

It was going good until the MC actually developed Crystal Release and decided he needed to master every other Chakra Nature under the sun to actually use it. In the more recent chapters the writing quality itself has taken a noticeable hit, to the point I genuinely wonder if there are two different authors or if his editor quit or something. Like there is no nuance in the conversation, everything is FULLY explained in the conversations, its reads like an internal dialogue at times and then I go back to check and there are quotation marks.

Honestly an incredible book. The pacing was fantastic, the story left you feeling all warm, and honestly it was such a nice read.

Fantastic book. The pacing is good, the side stories are great, and the 40k lore is actually accurate for the most part. The author knows his stuff and the books is addictive.

Translation started really solid, but it swiftly became apparent that the translator doesn't actually read the chapters before posting them. As the story goes on errors continue to add up, and Chinese euphemisms and names keep slipping through

"Doesn't give powers" literally can make him god...

it's been a fun read so far. focuses less on the main character and more on the fallout of his actions before the story starts. honestly though if you read it more as a slice-of-life it's refreshing.