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Thx

Thanks for the chap

I’m loving the feel of mystery here

The eldrich horror lol

My guy you really nailed the start of this novel! Good job! 👍

I disagree, all the things as been at comfortable pace without skipping essential parts, just summarizing it would ruin the great storytelling

Hands down one of the best starts to a novel I’ve read in a LOOOOOOOOOONG f#%king time, the cover was very confusing and I would have just dissmissed it if I wasn’t so bored.

Cool

This novel has some strong points and some weaker ones but I’d like to point out the attention to world building, it’s actually ok... which is rare

The part where she was shocked over the weight thing was a bit to forced, it didn’t feel like something to be surprised about but rather easy to figure out.

Yeah I feel the same, plus it’s delivered in a rather awkward manner...

Thanks for the chap

Silence~

Congratulations on chapter 1000!!! 🎉

M8 my dreams where crushed ages ago...

Dude... the reference... wow

So... all the wives as flaws, and strong points... yes yes, thier more emotional humans right? Then it makes sense that thier strengths are amplified as well as weakness! (In thier emotional state and personalities)

Take it one step at a time, you’re doing good so far, to much will bore the readers with exposition and to little willl confuse the readers with a lack of knowledge but you’ve struck a nice balance so far!

Oui! Don’t speak I’ll of violets dad! He’s a wise old man!