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Great chapter, but this was his first major battle in the story, so having him win by luck after practically giving up when things didn’t go exactly as he expected doesn’t sit well with me. He could have at least tried to go down fighting, using a basic attack to try and end the fight before he was killed and lost the experience.

Great start so far. I like that your character isn’t human. Most of these game type novels all introduce the different race option but they always choose a human protagonist making the option pointless. You should be carful when using abbreviations in the middle of sentence though, they should be reserved for the stat sheet or only used occasionally to keep from repeating words. Oh and In gaming terms ATP stands for attack points not attribute points. It’s used to calculate the players hit score and their damage dealt over time.

I love that movie. Ants was so much better than A Bugs Life, but nobody seems to remember it.

Sounds about right

It wasn’t Askel that put the hit on his parents in the draft it was Dolion. And Quinn doesn’t really need to get payback on these people, since they haven’t done anything to him.

Thanks for the chapter!!! Also exp 😅

Im definitely loving it 👍👍👍

Thanks for the chapter… also exp…

Stories like this one are exactly why I like coming to Webnovel. I’ll definitely go check out your new book. Thanks for everything

Adorable but random choice of pet. Unless your just referencing Karoo

It’s always fun to see how different writers tackle vampires and I have to say I love how your doin it!

Yeah I did, they were both pretty epic

This was an awesome chapter 🔥🔥🔥

That’s awesome and thanks for the chapter

Anyone else really like to see a wisp born in the core formation realm? They mentioned them before being as rare as phoenix feathers so I’m kind of expecting one to appear sooner or later.

When ever spiders are mentioned in this story, I’m always reminded of that one manga about the girl reborn as Spider since they are so alike.

When ever I see a guy react like Duri did when he saw Seven I always think of this scene with Jim Carey from The Mask