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Shouldn’t this be grade 2 if he just upgraded it?

Astoria? Do you mean Gabrielle? Isn’t Astoria Daphne greengrass’ sister?

Ez, Fast and Furious

Decapitation is for chopping off someone’s head, you’re looking for Amputation which is removal of a limb

Good good author didn’t forget

What happened to the kobold skill from last chapter? You know 10/10 enhanced sniff or night vision? Why did he not get that skill?

So I think if I remember right but Alucards immortality was based off the amount of souls he had, such as if he killed someone and absorbed their soul then if he died that soul would be consumed and he’d keep living as such if he had thousands of souls technically he had thousands of lives is that how it is in this story?

With all this bro it’s a bit rough. Something my English teacher always said was “show don’t tell”. Now this would mean writing something like “With a sprinkling of rose across her cheeks Kaguya found herself entranced with Lucifer’s smile, waiting all that time her heart can’t help but pound. Lucifer feeling the affection emanating from Kaguya find himself embracing her, whispering sweet promises in her ear. ‘Ah I really missed her so much’. Just something where we can feel what the characters feel instead of having their thoughts in Brackets. Anyways keep up the good work author 👌👌🫡