Is incredible. Your way of narrating is very good, the dialogues of the characters are fun and their way of expressing themselves is interesting, very typical of this type of narration. Even if it's just the prologue, I already loved it. I really feel like in a pirate story, although I don't know if that was your intention, but I like it. I'm anxious to know what will happen to Shane and Bo.
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Xendres
I did the elbow touch, and it worked for me
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Xendres
XD
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Anime & Comics · blazuki
I loved. The beginning is incredible.
ch 0 1 Just an old Book
Fantasy · JKSManga
I have just started reading your story, and I feel that it has potential ... I am not going to lie to you, there are things to improve, but it is very good and interesting... Thank you for sharing your work, I hope I can continue enjoying it. And, as a thank you for sharing your work, I see myself in the need to return such a kind gesture, inviting you to read my story, hoping that it can entertain you... (https://***.webnovel.com/book/knights-and-dragons_19497454105471705) No more to say, I say goodbye. I wish you a good week, and I send you a psychological hug. My name is H, and remember: my intentions are not good... :)
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Fantasy · MUHACHE_JUMA