Gender bender... again... Just why??? Even if it's just a small detail and doesn't have a strong impact on the story, I won't be able to forget this and enjoy the story anymore. Alas, although there seems to be potential, but I have to drop...
ch 0 4 System
LGBT+ · PraiseElune
Well, then I'll wait until you finish editing and come back later. But speaking of your "It's important to approach literature with an open mind". If you write for fun or for the sake of improving your writing skills or for some other reasons that do not include getting a large audience and a stable income, you can write as you wish. Otherwise, sometimes it's worth thinking about how to please potential readers. Anyway, good luck. See you later.
ch 0 -1 characters [6/28/2023]
Fantasy · Hail_The_loli
I haven't started reading the work itself yet, but these names... Author, tell me honestly, are you from a country with hieroglyphs or a similar alphabet without concept of Capital letters? And just look at this sentence. --mengxi (the child of Disney, the chosen one , the female lead , the heroin , the saintess)-- 1) The name begins with a small letter ... 2) Here and in the rest of the chapter there is some kind of mixture of Chinese and Western names. 3) Heroin... It's a drug No offense, of course, but after such an initial chapter, many will simply drop...
ch 0 -1 characters [6/28/2023]
Fantasy · Hail_The_loli
jinxed?
ch 0 1 False Hope?
LGBT+ · ThinkOSomeCoolName
So... no final chapter?
ch 453 Author Update!! Returning from the great silence
LGBT+ · ljack_ace
Why translate something at all if you do it so badly? This is nothing more than a slightly edited MTL, and although some may be satisfied with even such poor quality, I am not one of them. And even worse, the plot is pretty mediocre. I only read the first world, but it was only so-so. There were no unexpected moments, no turning points, not even a decent romance... Perhaps if there was a perfect translation, it would be possible to tolerate because there are practically no Yuri quick transmigration novels, but alas, with the current quality it does not deserve attention.
I do not want to be a villainess any more (GL). Erliu Li (a soft spot)
LGBT+ · A_Wild_Dreamer