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Maxwell_Joseph_8815

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I like the novel so far, so I would much likely still read

ch 14 < ANNOUNCEMENT ABOUT THE NOVEL > ( you can skip this if you want )

Universal Survival: I Can See My Summons Hidden Evolution Paths

Fantasy · kaeeeee

Maxwell_Joseph_8815

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You “start anew” with a new book by using the edited chapters, maybe

ch 152 I am not dead

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (Old Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

Maxwell_Joseph_8815

1yr

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I really like the concept but the story is too fast paced. There should be some time to go into detail about what is happening more world building. For example the MC has gotten a lot of high tier ablities but hardly uses them or when he does use them the entire scene is only a couple sentences long. It also seems like the MC is being powered-up too quickly, he has gotten to very powerful legacies in the first 15 chapters but there was almost no trials to get the legacies and all that comes with them.