Webnovel Author: femme_fatale - Novel Collection

I didn't get the plot after reading the synopsis but the first chapter was a blast and I think I can guess what's going to happen. The story is still in its early stages so there isn't much to say but you have a great writing style author and I hope you keep it up!

Truthfully speaking, I really really liked your fighting scenes. I loved how you portrayed the emotions of Gyun and how the story developed. It's really great that you put your experienced knowledge into your novel. I hope you keep it up, author!

Your advice for a new author was really great but sorry I can't let any of the options you suggested happen. :(

Don't panic about the negativity. I just needed this kind of review below my novel, so I'm really thankful 🤗 And considering your advice, should I put it in the male lead category? I only chose the female lead category because the main character is female. Please tell me what you think about this.

How come you can say that English isn't your first lang when you write it so greatly? Tell me you are lying. I got really mesmerised by the story and the way you write so Keep up the great work and I hope that this book becomes famous!

You're welcome cutie 🤗 I bet that you'll improve!

The story is really awesome! I liked it from the start and the plot is great too! There were not any mistakes I found so overall it was a great read. Keep it up, Author!

Actually, the synopsis is good, but the conversation between Seraphine and Alice, which is not related to the story, may come off as a different thing for the readers. It slightly feels as if they(the characters) are promoting their own story. And anything different always has to face people's opinions, whether they like it or not. Anyways, this is what I think :)

The story is written really better than I imagined it to be considering the synopsis. I was captivated by the dialogue and the storyline! Keep up the great work author!