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while the sentences that need them never have them. quality of this work is beyond subpar.
Kenichi looked at him and said "Don't hold back when the times come to attack me and save Honoka if you get the chance while I try to distract them!?"
Rebirth Of The Mightiest Disciple (Reboot)
Anime & Comics · shashank_bhatt
you misunderstand, I meant with the sentences not with the story. this sentence and the one before we're both Caroline, you skipped a reply.
"Well, it looks fabulous," Caroline responds.
In TVD/TO as Kol Mikaelson
TV · ItachiWeasel
missing a bit here
"Well, it looks fabulous," Caroline responds.
In TVD/TO as Kol Mikaelson
TV · ItachiWeasel
good luck with the rest of the story.
"My name is Sasuke Sarutobi and I will be your jounin sensei for the coming future, are there any questions someone would like to ask before we move on to introductions?" he asked them in his seriously lazy voice getting a raised hand from the boy with seemingly large eyebrows.
Naruto : Uchiha Clan
Anime & Comics · sybife
again, Sasuke? or sarutobi? better clarify that soon or edit it to make sense or you're really screwing over a part of your story, not to mention breaking the immersion.
"That idiot… what the hell was he thinking… jumping off a cliff? I'll send him straight into a coma when he wakes up…" she sobbed out making Sasuke chuckle and Tobirama slapped his palm over his face with a soft chuckle, maybe he shouldn't have mentioned that.
Naruto : Uchiha Clan
Anime & Comics · sybife
you need to edit your work before posting it. unless youre saying sausuke exists now too.
"To think Mito even taught him about the intricacies of our village's barrier defense system. She isn't letting up on training him eh Tobirama?" Sasuke spoke up, making him turn his glance to him and nod.
Naruto : Uchiha Clan
Anime & Comics · sybife
how many more changes are you going to make with the family relations? suddenly becomes the second hokages granddaughter rather than the first for some reason... it's getting pointlessly convoluted now.
"You have some nerve to try and abduct my granddaughter in broad daylight…" Tobirama's cold voice rang through the clearing while Sasuke Sarutobi stood by his side and untied the little bonded girl from her bonds, his signature cigar donned on his lips as usual letting out small wisps of smoke in the air.
Naruto : Uchiha Clan
Anime & Comics · sybife
Sasuke?
Sasuke spoke and the jounin glanced at the unconscious boy with incredulous eyes before his eyes rolled due to lack of oxygen and he fell unconscious when Tobirama hit his pressure point on his neck and let the body fall down like a sack of potatoes.
Naruto : Uchiha Clan
Anime & Comics · sybife
standard info tsunade should already know....
"You know everything, how are you so smart?" she asked him with a voice laced with admiration. He got a little embarrassed from her words and waved his hand dismissively.
Naruto : Uchiha Clan
Anime & Comics · sybife
you've made a naruto worse than the og. congrats. that's an achievement. not only obsessed with "friends" like og but now being far more meek, naive, and uninteresting as a character.
"Sugoi! Once more Naruto, I didn't get a good look at it please…" she pleaded with her hands clapped in the manner she was saying a prayer and he panted, wiping the sweat of his brow and nodded a little tiredly, he couldn't refuse his friend after all.
Naruto : Uchiha Clan
Anime & Comics · sybife
as if his losing was the issue and not the mockery of everyone including his teacher.
"And don't be all mopey-broody, just 'cause you lost 'kay?" she asked him, and got a tilt of the head from him in honest confusion.
Naruto : Uchiha Clan
Anime & Comics · sybife
whats the point of this story? really. it'd be the exact same if you kept the same setting as og and just made Minato a secret Uchiha. the only diff being an obvious tsunade love interest that alone doesnt make this an appetizing story.
Naruto stood up and walked away, completely ignoring his opponent's confused yet worried gaze on his back. He dusted his shirt clean off the dirt and walked to the tap by the side for drinking water.
Naruto : Uchiha Clan
Anime & Comics · sybife
herpo the foul?
"Clever goblin. I was the first Parselmouth in all of known time, the ability is a hereditary one in my family. It is fairly common in the family from what I know; your mother must have been rather unlucky to have not received it."
Harry Potter: The Dark Path
Book&Literature · Dream_Guardian
ah, you're right! I forgot the count of years is different for a few ages and that the ainur existed before arda... dudes frickin ancient.
Besides, from what he had heard from the villages he passed through, the boy would take on wolves and bears as if it were child's play. He would undoubtedly be a great help for the next dangerous journey.
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
this is just getting tedious now.
After living like a savage for more than half a month, Aldril missed a good glass of fresh orange juice.
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
correct. elves became orcs.
Aldril watched each movement carefully, absorbing every detail with awe "Oh friend, if I learn this style of sword effective against monsters, the poor orcs will suffer" With a small chuckle at his thoughts Aldril began to follow Geralt's steps, he began to imitate the movements.
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
lol funny thing, even "thousands" downplays how old he really is all things considered lol he was what, close to 10k when bilbo was born? xD
Besides, from what he had heard from the villages he passed through, the boy would take on wolves and bears as if it were child's play. He would undoubtedly be a great help for the next dangerous journey.
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
frustrated? I'm laughing bud xD you want that head canon to make it something so special but it's just a burn. it's amazing. it's even in the manga lol you say it's childish but you deflect from my actual point. which is the literary device that oda himself says he uses them as and also the examples in the manga. just cuz I'm mocking you and you don't like it doesn't make my words any less true xD
Doffy chose to keep most of the events that unfolded at Mary Geoise from Diamante and Vergo. He only shared superficial details, but even with the limited information, Diamante must have sensed that something significant had occurred. With the visible wounds on my body and the branded slave mark etched into my back, his deductions weren't far from the truth. Moreover, Diamante was aware of our backup plan for escape, which added another layer of understanding to the situation.
ONE PIECE : BROTHERHOOD
Anime & Comics · Silent_stiele
the idea for this ff is amazing and even adding the mcu elements were odd but manageable to keep the story interesting... but now that im rereading this, I'm seeing how absolutely atrocious the grammar and structure of this story is. like gd dmn it's awful. how did I even finish my first read through? I must have a subconscious autocorrect talent when skimming through things cuz this is just... wow...
Rebirth Of The Mightiest Disciple (Reboot)
Anime & Comics · shashank_bhatt