I was rude as well amd am sorry for that. Hope you enjoy the story to the very end. :)
ch 1983 Incomprehensible
Action · Lord_Streak
See, this is constructive criticism. And I deeply appreciate that. I really do. You don't have to be too formal, I just didn't like the tone of the original comment. I will keep this in mind and see if I can tinker around to avoid inadvertently belittling readers. I hate to know that some readers have felt this way and it was never my intention. Thanks.
ch 1983 Incomprehensible
Action · Lord_Streak
These kinds of comments spoil what is otherwise a pleasant experience for me. In general, I like objective criticisms regarding logical consistency and narrative coherence. I work hard to maintain them in this story. Whenever my readers point them out, I quickly fix them. But 'angels beasts :/' and 'less YAPPING' just comes off as immature petulance that stems from impatience to me, personally. It's been a mere two days since the Mellow arc started. If you're too impatient to enjoy the ride calmly then I would rather such readers save their money and stop reading, with all due respect. I don't mind earning less if it means having higher reader-author compatibility. I would rather earn less money if it means having more enjoyable fan interactions.
ch 1983 Incomprehensible
Action · Lord_Streak
He didn't get lucky.
ch 1983 Incomprehensible
Action · Lord_Streak
First of all, this is an entirely criticism altogether. Secondly, yes, Kane is an idiot compared to Rui. So yes, when Rui makes inferences/deductions through twenty or thirty layers of inductive or deductive propositional logic, he needs to explain each layer of logic to Kane step by step. It's also literally important to the decisions that will impact the rest of the story.
ch 1983 Incomprehensible
Action · Lord_Streak
If you want an MC who engages in mindless action without rigorous, complex, and elaborate thought process behind decisions, stop reading right now. All information, every word uttered, is relevant to the main storyline. If you lack patience for even this much, then that is, again, your shortcoming, not this story's.
ch 1983 Incomprehensible
Action · Lord_Streak
Read the Bible's description of them. They're monsters. Calling them beasts is actually defamation against beasts.
ch 1978 Angelic Encounter
Action · Lord_Streak
What do you mean? This is the right chapter.
ch 1928 Elder Tree
Action · Lord_Streak
Thank you for the gift! I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you for your continued support and hope you enjoy the rest of the novel.
ch 1751 Come Forth
Action · Lord_Streak
Thanks for the gift.
ch 0 1 Rebirth
Action · Lord_Streak
Thanks for the gift.
ch 1862 Escalation
Action · Lord_Streak
Thank you for the gift!
ch 1834 The Power of a Martial Sage
Action · Lord_Streak
See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
ch 0 1 The Finality
Fantasy · Purple_Midnight
Volume would expand because of the liquified air absorbing the necessary enthalpy of vaporization from the air.
ch 1989 Cooling Elements
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak