MasherDon - Profile

I liked everything at the beginning. But before the hero had time to walk around in the new world, he thought about the harem. I didn't notice the harem tag, but this directly said something about it. Next... Haku? Seriously? I was hoping it would be at least a couple of decades before canon.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Azula is of course the main waifu of the world of Avatar, but this is too cliche.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

The plot is not bad... But Azula? Maybe at least May or Toph. Certainly not Azula. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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We wait. Hope. Believe. Come join us for a new chapter. We have waited so long and will wait for more. Come visit us soon... Please. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Pretty long fanfic. Well written. Much attention is paid to the characters and their personality. If you are a naruto fan I highly recommend reading this. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Good original work. Especially the storytelling style. Good luck author. Thank you for your hard work. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

I decided to write a review anyway... The first 150 chapters are well written. I stopped reading after reading them. And just recently I went back and skimmed through chapter 300 and gave up again. This is certainly not a Chinese novel with a thousand chapters where the plot is stretched to the impossible. Vice versa. Characters start to turn too fast, and sometimes not much enough. Saving character is not such a big problem, but fury already in the first 100 chapters had to do something with the main character. He poses too much in front of them. Too many events connected with him. If not a fury, then the hydra would definitely do something. TVA and Ancient were for the most part all the same. If the plot is not important to you, you do not like the harem and any mention of your favorite plot turns you on that this is for you.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

If you didn’t see the harem tag, the ecchi tag hooked you and you decided to read it, then I regret to say that this is a joke. this is a harem(( [img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

The fastest disclosure of the heroic personality and getting into the avengers)) it's not quite what I expected. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

I'm hoping for you author, but in the end it's heartbreak again. do not forget to add this tag so as not to deceive anyone's expectations. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

My opinion? The fanfic is not bad, but the ending of the first volume is a bit long. At least it's not stupid romance or a typical harem, but that's something. I advise you to pay less attention to the violent scenes, as this is not quite in the spirit of one piece, although it gives this fanfic a distinctive feature. Also... I have no idea how the character of the protagonist will develop now and what place he wants to take in this fictional world now... Is this a reimagined version of his past famous incarnation?