Anna. The writing is from her pov so she is the main character.
That’s me right there.
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That’s sad.
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I am sorry for nitpicking but H should be capital.
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So far I read till chapter 5 because the chapter were so short. I didn’t realised I was there. Okay, so the characters were interesting. I loved the way you wrote dialogue. It seemed relatable. Everything was good but I noticed in some places you used comma instead of fullstop. Reread the chap and edit it out. Overall nice read. All the best author.
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How many words you write in a chapter? I am curious.
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But what did he call her? I found nothing cringe.
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Didn’t expected the start to be so spicy. I didn’t know what to even comment. Lol. Anyway, I don’t usually read smut so let’s move to the plot. There are only 2 chapters so far. So can’t judge. But your writing style is amazing. Good luck. I know it will get popular in future for sure. [img=recommend]
When The Moon Tilts West
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