Kat_Lex

Kat_Lex

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Kat_Lex
Kat_Lex
5 months ago
Posted

I have been reading this author's work for a while now and they developed their stories very well, it isn't needlessly predictable. I am looking forward to how what is in the synopsis is incorporated into the story. I am a fan a many of the multiple people in love with one person stories but the way this plays out is well crafted and realistic in a way. I would have love to have seen more of how the main character grew up, it seems like we might learn more as the story progresses and that's how it is in there other story.

Kat_Lex
Kat_Lex
2 years ago
Replied to Secondworldgod

discombobulate, disconcert, perturb, etc

"Well, no. But I'm more talking about you knowing a big word like 'discombobulate' and using it correctly. I'm genuinely surprised you could do that."

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

อะนิเมะและการ์ตูน · AStoryForOne

Kat_Lex
Kat_Lex
2 years ago
Posted

I love the way characters from different stories are brought together to make a new story. I didn't know all the characters before reading this but It was still enjoyable.

Kat_Lex
Kat_Lex
2 years ago
Replied to giovanni_menapace

Exactly my point. Why not throw in a little bad luck

"I could use your input on a few things anyways. Tell me when you get to page fourteen, there's something specific there that I'm unsure about and could use another perspective."

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

อะนิเมะและการ์ตูน · AStoryForOne

Kat_Lex
Kat_Lex
2 years ago
Commented

Why not 13

"I could use your input on a few things anyways. Tell me when you get to page fourteen, there's something specific there that I'm unsure about and could use another perspective."

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

อะนิเมะและการ์ตูน · AStoryForOne

Kat_Lex
Kat_Lex
Kat_Lex
2 years ago
Replied to Woohye

Read the end of chapter 19

Kat_Lex
Kat_Lex
Kat_Lex
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter

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Kat_Lex
Kat_Lex
2 years ago
Replied to TIAkilesIT

Thank you for sharing your opinion. I don't introduce new characters to change the plot, I introduce them to show the development of new and original characters and how they interact. Sorry to say, my writing probably won't be to your liking if you cannot be patient.