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But its enjoyable, that the more important, we enjoy this story.

Awesome Story More plz. this is a really good story kind of fun to see how you're putting the story together it's kind of like how you're doing with it interesting and be kind of fun to see all the technology going to bring in

which girl did he meet her yet

AUTHOR - Grand_Void_Daoist Awesome Story, really long it can you let us know who's the girl in the photo MC's personality changes when he met the Spider, The spider does act he is from the higher world. I'll try to continue reading if it continues being like I mean the MC is the puppet I have to let go of this novel I am at 1556 now it Awesome

Hi Guys Zephyr here, this is an an Awesome Novel From webnovel.comby Dark_Bangali, lets Help Support the Author really love this novel[img=coins]

This is an Awesome, Story It has a good concept (though the concept is nothing new). However, the clunky grammar, bad dialogue, flat characters (this might change in later chapters I'm not sure) really dragged it down for me. Now, I'd have liked to comment about the story (which is bland for me so far, but that's just my opinion), but I will refrain from doing so until I finish all the available chapters. ===The section below is my personal preferences only. Take it with a grain of salt=== The tense... you use present tense. It's not particularly bad, but it just feels weird, considering that a good chunk of stories here are written in past tense. The use of the so-called 'sound effects' really breaks immersion. And the thing where you said about no yuri... yeah no that's a flat-out lie. It's borderline yuri with some of the characters. === Anyways I made an account just to give this a review. Good luck on your future writing, Author.