Webnovel Author: Erubey - Fanfic Collection

i read this for quite a bit from the MTL translations honestly it's not that bad but author purposefully lowered the intelligence of the MC to keep the novel going so its filled with filler chapters and a story that doesn't go anywhere but only run in a circle if you have the patience of a saint you should try it

well yeah you can have named characters but this guy is going to be fighting with the way things are going planetary or even intergalactic wars hell you might even implement virus gaining hivemind like capabilities and have them act like tyranids my point is at some point he'll need grunt soldiers and cloning seems very fit for it

you could just explain it as nanomachines making him stronger etc like that nano machine novel and about the SAS 4 universe, you don't have to actually have the whole universe and its command structure be obedient to the system after all system is just themed in SAS 4 but the actual system is a whole another thing, SO you could just have him unlock i dunno some kind of cloning tech and disguise it as conscription or recruiting just give them the same armor and guns badumm you have SAS soldiers on standby

the system itself has the capability to do so, you could just make it so that he can't arm/recruit/buy conscripts is because he doesn't have a high enough rank plus you already made consessions with him giving him the flawless progenitor serum instead you could have naturally boosted his physique and constitution with each rank up and you already hinted at a higher command structure existing that saved the main character from being kidnapped

it's really good, but honestly? i expected the themes to lean more heavily on the ranks and SAS4 military, this one seems to lean more towards kingdom building and politics, i want this guy to get general rank and participate in planetary wars.

main character seems very bland, dialogues too most of them sound pretty amateurish not a really big deal, the biggest bummer to me was the MC having nothing to do with bloodborne and hunting besides having hunter attire, plot also seems not very interesting, could use a bit of spice.