Reiya9

Reiya9

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Commented

Bunch of idiots

ch 0 6 Chapter 6:- Creation of realm of void and superheroes POV

traveling omniverse as a origin being

Anime & Comics · Sandesh_Belbase

Reiya9

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Honestly this story has a lot of potential but it’s terribly written. The author just writes with no soul and no heart. Idk if this is MTL edited or what but the writing is very boring, monotone, and repetitive. The main character is just boring and I can’t see anything special about her. I’m uninterested in her life and what she accomplished because it’s just repeated every chapter in a different way. The writimg itself is the worst part because it feels like I’m reading a history book. Just gives you information again and again with nothing to keep you readimg. Just terribly monotone and boring writimg

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How many times do you have to repeat it each chapter? We get it shes not normal she’s a warrior with relentless drive destined for greatness

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Reiya9

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The last three paragraphs of every chapter are just repeats with the same exact things said different ways

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She’s been doimg this for a while and all of a sudden she needs shield? She can hack and get the info she wants from other sources. This is just forced plot

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Reiya9

1d

Commented

The story is really good but it doesnt feel natural. Its very formal and feels monotone

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Reiya9

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Commented

So it didn’t increase at all lol

Before this, Hideichi Hoshita's brain thinking speed increased by 1 times.

Naruto: I became the mastermind behind the scenes (MTL)

Anime & Comics · Destiny_Splash

Reiya9

2d

Commented

Minato should still be alive at this point. Why a remthey talking like he’s dead

ch 15 Sarutobi Hiruzen's Decision

Naruto: I became the mastermind behind the scenes (MTL)

Anime & Comics · Destiny_Splash

Reiya9

3d

Replied to LORD_ASHURA_

By adding another suceder supreme and having the hat know eveything about him. You put his secret out with some trash hat that knows his whole life not to mention there’s another sorcerer supreme here. The unique abilities of the mc are just gone. It also doesn’t give much hope of what other random stuff you will add to the story.

ch 0 4 Chapter 4 Hogwarts part 1