Webnovel Author: shootingstar27 - Novel Collection

this is my honest review the flow of the story is good, every chapter is long and that is a good thing .however there are some errors and some of it are really confusing especially when you expressed the MC life. So I hope you would be more careful on expressing the MC life that is clear and interesting.

Hi everyone!! I'm an author shootingstar27, 16 years old. I hope that you like my first novel, this novel will take you to a magical place where werewolves, witches, elves, ancient magicians, and humans coexist.

One thing that I like about this novel is, Is how you deliver what the MC doing, and thinking and also how you deliver it as a narrator. every chapter is long and it's a good thing also every title of your chapters literally would make the readers curious and excited to read more of it. to be honest it is my first time reading about a transmigration novel about modern sports. it feels unique and new to me.

thank you for your honest review ❤️☺️🥺

I like the plot and the story ,but you should make every chapters longer and keep on updating so your novel can be promoted . You can also make some interesting praises in the beginning and the end of every chapter.

the story is really interesting and the writing quality is amazing 🙂 for me a 16 year old writer and beginner I'm amazed ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

the story is very good I want to read the next chapter ,and the writing quality really 👍😊 I want to read the next chapter do badly ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️