Webnovel Author: MoonlightBomber - Novel Collection

Isekai. A dumb protagonist, who hopefully will wise up. A system of cultivation in place. Overall, this makes for a slow burn in terms of pacing, but I expect the developments, character-wise and plot-wise, to become better and better.

As I'm a straight guy and not a fan of BL by default, I am normally not interested in this. But in the first chapter, I can see the establishment of the pairing right off the bat, and while it's predictable, this bodes well for the rest of the story.

Right off the bat, we see clear POVs from the two main characters. This way, we readers can clearly see their thoughts ad motivations that will eventually tie them together.

While there are some tiny, tiny nitpicks I can spot, this novel is off to a great start. Great use of the first-person POV that truly defines the MC's personality.

A strong start, and an intricately-designed system that is not designed to be too cryptic. The way Japan is portrayed is also good enough as a fan of Japanese media myself. Will look forward to what happens next.

This novel has a strong and comprehensible beginning, with the protagonist's motivation for his adventure already set up in just two chapters. Hope this keeps up.

The first four chapters should clue you in to a straightforward yet strong start. We get the in medias res beginning of how a teacher ended up with a vampire, and how the story's immediate world is plagued by ghouls. I also can appreciate the use of the present tense in narration, and the presentation and flow are well-written and easy to understand. I can't wait to know what happens next.

So far, after reading 300+ chapters, I give my take. The characters are good, the worldbuilding is good, and the lovemaking scenes can be pretty hot. The only faults I can find are Lawrend being kind of a dolt at times and Humility's... uh... quirks.

Even though I'm a straight guy and generally don't care for LGBT+ stories that are not on the L side of things, the first few chapters are well-built, giving a solid foundation to what will happen next. Furthermore, the fact that there is already an established transmigration/reincarnation organization pleased me.

While it's plagued by some missing commas, the story doesn't beat around the bush in establishing what kind of character Gerald is. He may be the laughingstock of his rich family, but I expect him to be a "crouching tiger, hidden dragon" type of rich man.

The Easter Carnival led me to this comic, and I'm floored at what the MC is. He has the right amount of badass, he has the right amount of smug, and he has the right amount of care and concern to people who should be protected the most. Can't wait to read more.

Strong, action-packed beginning. Serious maids doing combat. What more you can ask for? While the grammar and paragraph implementation could use some improvement, it's still a fun read.

Judging from the premise alone, I think your story was inspired by another cat character from Sword Art Online Abridged, who coincidentally is also named Fluffles (but is male instead of female). But still, both cats are deadly, and so I look forwards to what happens next.

Basically put, this is "Never Mess With Granny", the LitRPG. Also, the premise of this novel reminds me of the grandma who loves to play Skyrim, and how she captured other players' hearts. Flora, the MC, is basically the same. She's endearing.

I really like the idea where the man and his harem are on par with each other in terms of fighting ability. And seeing what I've read so far, this story has some good prospects.