I am an ambiguous writer, one day you may be reading about something, and the next day I come up with a completely different story than before. I hope you enjoy my stories.
2022-05-09 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
It was the first 30 episodes not the first 20, my mistake. Also after that, well you know what I think
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Well, here is my review: The first 20 chapters were entertaining to read, the story had a good development, the mc's relationship with the other characters was well explained and understandable, and the story was well written. But (and this is where this story fell flat for me) when the canon characters showed up, that's when everything got screwed up. The super forced relationship that the mc tried to sell as Ron Wesley's mentor was pathetic to say the least, then as you noticed that he was getting to know the other characters it also seemed super forced to me. Why the hell would the mc have to teach Hermione a charm just to keep her out of trouble? The girl is 2 years younger than Mc, just tell her to leave and that's it. Another thing that bothered me a lot was how the third year arc lasted so long, when the first 2 years weren't like that. I understand that it was because of the whole thing about the philosopher's stone and so on, but it really wore me out on all that arc.
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Absolutely nefarious here abandoned this story
ch 0 3 Chapter 2: Road to Winterfell.
TV · Adalwolf_k
Hi, thanks for the comment. What happens is that I use a translator to be able to respond to comments and reviews. I understand that it is annoying that the story is not in your native language. I'm so sorry, and thanks for trying.
ch 0 1 Capitulo 1 - El comienzo de Todo
Movies · Apolonius556
Hello! Thanks for the comment, I am aware that wizards belonging to the Black family use star names, which is why my character's middle name is Orion. I decided to put Dimitri as the first name to be able to give the character more originality and to be able to highlight him from other characters already read with this theme. Without further ado, I hope this detail doesn't lead you not to read this great story. Have a good day.
ch 0 1 Capitulo 1 - El comienzo de Todo
Movies · Apolonius556
Muchas gracias por esas piedritas siempre se agradece el apoyo! :D
ch 0 9 Capítulo 9 - Recuerdos y Clases de defensa contra las artes ocuras.
Movies · Apolonius556
Thank you very much for the comment! I'm glad you're liking the story, have a nice day too.
ch 0 8 Capítulo 8 - Pensamientos y Clases Compartidas
Movies · Apolonius556
Hey, muchas gracias por el comentario, y me alegro mucho que te este gustando la historia. La verdad que me fasino las ideas que me has escrito y ten por seguro que voy a tomar algunas para poder seguir con la historia. Planeo que el fanfic tenga varios volumenes asi que quedate tranquilo que voy a tratar de implementar varias de tus ideas en la historia. Como dije antes muchas gracias por comentar, e interesarte en este proyecto que bueno, es un poco chiquito en el sentido que no muchas personas lo leen, pero estoy contento que por lo menos a alguien le este gustando.
ch 0 7 Capítulo 7 - La llegada a Hogwarts.
Movies · Apolonius556
Why the hell do you post 20 chapters and then demand that if they want to read more they have to pay on patreon? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------