Kayn21

Maybe this is petty. But how on earth can you misspell the title of your book? I haven’t read the thing, but how can you expect someone to pay money (and lots of it on this overpriced site) on your book if you haven’t even made the effort to spell out 4 words correctly. Brother, it’s 4 words. Born in THE apocalypse. Again maybe petty, but come on…

Mixed feelings about this novel. It should be good, as the premise should be interesting, but it’s not (for me). I just can’t take the story seriously. Too many immersion breaks, too many „basic“ jokes, like tf is a “copyright god” and the “mafia boys”. Weird language sometimes, like you read in a instagram section. You feel like a 10th grader wrote this sometimes. The villains are two-dimensional, like always the monarchs and gods are stupid and only the MC came up with the most basic of solution and that makes him a genius. You just can’t feel anything for the characters.

For the love of god, why do some authors constantly switch tenses?! I don’t mind some grammar errors here and there, but this constantly breaks the immersion… Just pick one tense and stick with it, it’s not that hard…

Definitely one of the better ones. Although nothing new, an abused child transmigrating to a fantasy world becoming an assassin, it’s very well written and had some good world building. The problem is, the MC is so detached and emotionless with no overlying goal, besides becoming stronger, that it becomes repetitive. Kill, train, forge weapons and repeat. Side characters had potential, but were soon discarded. Doesn’t look like there is a FL. I still like the story, but I feel like the MC character makes an otherwise good story boring, with constant edge lord behavior. Quote: “Do you need other people to cover your weaknesses?” “I have no weaknesses.” Spoilers: I have to say for the first 100 or so chapters I was fascinated with the plot, great pacing and good character development. As soon as he got to the academy things got worse with some plot holes. He seems to be the best genius to ever lived, even though it was stated he had no talent. Some kids in their first year were sent as spy’s to foreign country, cause why not and after falling out with the academy the royal family instead of taking in this incredible genius they wanted to kill him, because they’re big bad nobles, that’s why.

Dear author, I was/am still a huge fan of this book, due to its in depth world building and good story (at least at first). The problem I’ facing and I read a lot of comments feeling the same way, is that you introduce way to many characters and I mean WAY to many. The pov switches literally every chapter and it feels like the characters are in the 1000s at this point, to the point that I’d probably would need a list next to it to remember them all. Especially as this a chapter updating novel and you come back after some days and don’t remember anything. At the moment I’m skipping to most parts until we finally see the MC again every 10 chapters. I reall liked this novel and I’m saddened to see it like this :(

I don’t know what people are on about with „good writing“ in this nove. I’m thinking of dropping it after 5 chapters. Author constantly switches past and presence and for f**** sake it’s BECAUSE not CAUSE. Are you gang affiliated or what?!

Thanks for that :) I was going to give it a try, but I truly hate those kind of dumb MCs at this point