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Wished there was more detail in his relationship building and not skipped over. Took forever to build his war rune to tier 3 just to skip over an important story element. Anyways, I hope Michael gives Alice a powerful soultrait soon. She would be even more dominating! Also poor Maria, she joined the academy just to not have much interaction with Michael.

A few things to mention. First as some said with a population of 200k the army needs to be alot more. Instead of 10k id say 60-100k. Would love for his tier to progress a tad faster and soultrait levels for all of the secondary ones. Otherwise with the current conversion and how long it takes him to level up to 6-7 star its getting not too feasible to see him max out all soultraits and become a God of War. Much less getting to 8 or 9 stars! Which id love to see. Having some tournament would be good to show how he has progressed. Again you don’t have to explain each fight. Maybe out of 10 fights explain 3 of them for time sake. I would like people to kinda cheer him on as coming from a nobody. Would like to see Alice’s territory and gain some insight from her. And lastly I really really want to see some romantic progress between Michael and Alice!!! Love your novel. Really well written! Thanks man.

Great…bought privileges this month only for them to release like 6 chapters. Good story but not worth it.

Great…bought privileges this month only for them to release like 4 chapters. Good story but not worth it.