Korkyros - Profile

Great Story thus far. A little too quick in pacing in my opinion due to the 5 year time skip where nothing to the reader's knowledge occurred that was worth while. I would probably recommend when you do the rewrite like you said that you don't just completely skip that time and maybe add a bit of his efforts during this time. Maybe he does a bit of classical theatre acting or a couple of gigs at bars. It just seems like 5 years is a bit excessive time skip in a world without supernatural ability or an ability to extend his life even if it is realistic.

I see so its a wiki of what? I guess I will try to google it. When I googled SCP by itself it brought me to a bunch of random things that were unrelated to fiction. My first point still stands btw. IF you do not know what SCP is you are just thrown into the deep end. I kind of likened it in my mind to X-Files or a Law and Order set up, maybe even creepy pasta. Also there is no SCP tag so going in I simply thought it was a cross-over multiversal story. The only mention of SCP in your summary is at the end and only briefly. I found your story going to the Fanfiction then most recent and figured I would give it a try. I wasn't trying to complain either. I was simply giving criticism letting you know a flaw in your style. I agree with your point about you should be allowed to assume its a fanfic of this so you don't have to explain but you have a tag for FGO and FGO is in your title so I thought that, that was going to be the main world thus i assumed it was a fanfic of FGO not some SCP. I know what waifu catalog is as it is rather prevalent here on webnovel but before encountering it a few times I had no idea what it was outside of my assumption due to the words being pretty good descriptors.

Entering the story if you do not know SCP (like myself) you have no understanding what is going on. There is no real explanation of what is going on just horrific event after horrific event. No explanation of characters appearance outside of their fingernails. Knowing that SCP - and having no previous understanding or where to find the source - is the majority of this story as of current, I find the story lacking as a fanfiction. I know recently a new arc for FGO has begun but the question stands do i need to read the previous arc to read the new one? If not then why is it a continuation of the story? If yes then I would say it was executed poorly for anyone who doesn't have canon knowledge.

Had me reading it with intrigue till chapter 9 which is left field weird kinda like M.Night. Shamalan films. Hick ups in translation or the author doesnt know how language works. The story actually has a great pacing in my opinion. They rely on character design and world background of the original work until chapter 9. At the moment I am not sure this is transformitive enough to legally be called a fanfiction.