What a great novel! Wonderful job done, my dear author... truly exceeded my expectations!However, there are some issues: the story is great, the setting is great; everything is seemingly going well, but it's boring—oh, let me expand on that!The development is extremely lacking in speed! Do not make the majority of a chapter monologue! Give readers time to comprehend the chapter; make it slow at some point; partially give us information about the characters; do not immediately dump everything on us! Overall, 5 stars in: Writing Quality, World Background, and Character design. 3 stars in Story development(Fasten the pace! It's vital! And lastly, 3 stars for Updating Stability.Please, don't let this review discourage you! I wrote this to point out flaws of the novel to help you improve yourself! I see so much potential in this and you; hope to take part in clearing the clouds in the sky—to see the sun shine like never before!Good luck, Author—can't wait to see more from you!Also, do this man a favor and take my words into consideration, will you?
Anime & Comics · Boundless_
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What a great novel! Wonderful job done, my dear author... truly exceeded my expectations!However, there are some issues: the story is great, the setting is great; everything is seemingly going well, but it's boring—oh, let me expand on that!The development is extremely lacking in speed! Do not make the majority of a chapter monologue! Give readers time to comprehend the chapter; make it slow at some point; partially give us information about the characters; do not immediately dump everything on us! Overall, 5 stars in: Writing Quality, World Background, and Character design. 3 stars in Story development(Fasten the pace! It's vital! And lastly, 3 stars for Updating Stability.Please, don't let this review discourage you! I wrote this to point out flaws of the novel to help you improve yourself! I see so much potential in this and you; hope to take part in clearing the clouds in the sky—to see the sun shine like never before!Good luck, Author—can't wait to see more from you!Also, do this man a favor and take my words into consideration, will you?
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Anime & Comics · Boundless_