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Obsession: Lucien Veyrion, Returning to the Clan, Cultivation.
แฟนตาซี · Dragon_Heart9
ohhhhh!!!! I know where this goiimbg
Obsession: Lucien Veyrion, Returning to the Clan, Cultivation.
แฟนตาซี · Dragon_Heart9
what?? did he use ai??
hooked from the start author release more chapters plz.. ..
lol
A beautiful woman, wearing a long blue dress that highlighted her curves and her well-proportioned figure.
ตะวันออก · ceezee_
aren't they at max lvl??
"Exactly," Mark grinned. "And most enemies ignore me anyway, while you two can keep leveling up against the dungeon boss. And with Aria as support…"
แฟนตาซี · Koguma
bruh?? th is this paragraph
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แฟนตาซี · Ainzzol
if u write like this then ur novel won't last even 100 chaps coz readers need interaction not inner monologues and u r repeating a lot of sentences and that's not something a reader would like. The reason I m reading is cause of new power concept and story otherwise I would dropped on the 1st chapter itself. So better improve the writing and there is lack of feelings in the lines it's like talking to a robot so better change that.
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แฟนตาซี · Ainzzol
bro u use chatgpt right?!
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แฟนตาซี · Ainzzol
fuckkkk....!!!!
As he was about to speak, both of their gazes snapped to the side. "It seems we have company."
Obsessive Gacha System
แฟนตาซี · Dragon_Heart9