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Its a very interesting story. At first the writing quality wasnt that great and even a bit awful, but as the story progress the writing quality has improved to a good degree. Arifureta is a novel i used to like quite a bit, specially the after story, and this MC really has a good compatibility with the story and its characters, especially with Nagumo as that best friend that you just want to beat up at times (very often lol). Its to the point i have even pictured them bantering in the after story as if tje MC was cannon lol. 🔥SPOILER ALERT: 🔥 It also seems to add some plot twists, not to mention Tohru, Remias situation screams time travel or something similar, now the question is... Is Myu MCs biological daughter, or is she birthed through something similar to parthenogenesis with MCs help? Im quire curious of how will that plot unfold.

Although... The story itself... Isn't bad... It gets... Really... Reaaally... Reaaallyyyy... Annoying... This way of... Writing. After all... Wouldn't be better? To say what you want to say... In a single solid sentence... Than split it apart... In several pieces? Same when people talk... They dont say the whole thing in one go... Thet just... Talk... Like... This... Seriously, this story is interesting and would like to keep reading it, but that kind of writing is just to annoying. I've read several fanfics with this same problem that i ended up dropping just because of this writing style. I dont know if it's an original or a tl, but if the original is like this too then wow i dont know how people can like this style.