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After leaving the team, the adventurer ladies regretted it deeply
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Lin Da, a former professional player, arrived in the game "Mystic Continent" and aimed to team up with a few "Young Ladies" from Another World to conquer fifty levels of Mystic Realm and become the strongest adventurer squad.
However, ever since the team had risen to fame, they had changed somewhat.
"Why is your healing so slow? I almost got killed by the Magical Creatures."
"The reason your level is so low is that you don’t train diligently, always have crooked thoughts about us. This 23-year-old guy is so disgusting."
"Better leave the team and become my servant instead; my pet dog just needs a playmate."
The attitude of the three Young Ladies chilled Lin Da’s heart, and he opted out of this team that he had been with for three years and had grown deeply fond of.
Only then did they realize who the core of the team really was.
When they regretted their actions too late and tried to apologize to Lin Da, seeking to join his team, Lin Da glanced at the team composed of prettier and hotter beautiful girls behind him and said helplessly:
"Sorry, my team is full."
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I been reading this book and its pretty good so far the only thing I have 2 problems.. the first is y the hell would anyone put a character that is a bear/panda girl in a good it actually is really stupid!! and the second problem is that the MC didnt tell the caption what she did wrong and that gose for the hole team when they came in.. He should have told them all and especially the captain... and he should be telling everyone y he left and not keeping .it a secret and everything!!! If these can get fixed that would be way better bit most likely wont!! And Y is there no more chapters coming out!!! And no can go past like chapter 40 unless they spend coins for the advanced chapters wich sucks!! I kinda want to see where this book gose even with these small problems!!
An extremely enjoyable read. I started reading on a whim and was blown away by how good it actually is. Not my usual genre, so I wasn't expecting much. Now it's one of the few novels I will pay to support for win win. Do yourself a favor and give it a try.
Enjoying the story quite a lot. Even did that prestige thing for my first time. Anxious for more chapters. Keep up the great work!
The story on itself is quite interesting even if it is a typical fool-regretting-expulsing-op/needed-mc but the translation which is clearly mtl without proof-reading is quite annoying. If the one who's posting can proof-read and correct with appropriate translation the quality will go up.
Read as of 300+ Aiko is best girl. It's a niche (I think i recall the author having a few chapters talking about the struggle with the popularity of his book) and somewhat of a slice of life with lots of focus on Heroines and the relationship with the main character. But it's really good when it comes to the story it's trying to tell. If you can survive the obnoxious Lia, then you will enjoy it if you like the style of this novel. Definitely one of my favourite Chinese fantasy novels because of the heavy focus of relationships between the mc and heroines. SPOILER My favourite moment is definitely that moment when he shows off to one of his past gacha party members his past lost overpowered strength during a moment of crisis. THE RETURN OF SHADOW!!! That moment was fu**ing epic and hype. Definitely one of my favourite tropes. Aiko is Best girl!!!
love the caracters and the story never a boring moment. Would recomend this book to people who love anime like i am a slime. Hope this story is made into a comic and anime one day.[img=exp]
The story is interesting and the character interactions are fun to read. Just a few points of criticism: grammar and name issues, MC's name keeps changing and there are some metaphors that are hard to understand. The story is quite slow paced. Where I left, after all the free chapters, it just focuses on the group MC leaves and there isn't much of MC doing really anything. It would have been nice if it got to more action and see how the main character deals with enemies before the chapters are locked. Also, MC is a bit of a pushover, I don't know how he was so content on being treated like a dog/slave for that many years by that group, despite being a transmigrator who has knowledge on this world. But, I guess it makes it satisfying when he leaves and they all regret it as he literally did everything! from massaging their feet, cooking, planning, and being a leader. Also, I was a bit turned off when he got the 'useless' God as a companion cliche. Moreover, the God got gender bent into a 'panda' girl. As for panda, I have no idea if it's a metaphor or not, if she really is a panda demi human, or it meant panda as in how she looks. Otherwise, she's not too annoying, and the dynamic between the two is funny.
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The characters are well fleshed out and the relationships between them are emotion evoking, the pacing is very slow and the storyline has multiple similarities with other media: exe.Konosuba. On a another note the skill development tree of the MC is very niche which can be good or bad: Healer/Poisoneer/Purifier(specific)
It was a fantastic book. Looking forward to reading more books from the author ✍️
A surprisingly great read. This story feels like it should be a generic read, but the author does a great job of inserting depth. It's a story that is easy to enjoy.
very rushed and weak ending, that leaves you wirh bad aftertaste. beginning was best, in middle it was starting to become tedious, and them its just rush that leaves you with plot points that were not closed
I have been reading this book until this point c314 I think it is well written but there is a problem in The monitory System if you keep harvesting literal gold coins in the dungeon/world tree and bringing them out eventually you will bring too many gold coins into the market depressing there value collapsing your economy. this is something that happened in Spain when they brought back too much gold from the new world I know this world is mirroring a game world but in the game world this problem does not exist because the money literally disappears into a black hole when you spend it this does not happen in an actual world unless you makesomething that you can actually spend money Inside The World tree to reduce the amount of gold in the world otherwise the economy will collapse
Boring, no levelling till chapter 20-25, only some mello drama of some girls, past memories of MC, and One main drawback that MC lost his sister but still in mood to waste time like living freely, having wife and so on when he was asked to be hero. The heck, MC is purely loser in character
Pretty bad novel. 1) MC is a big SIMP 2) grammatical errors 3) gender bender - MC asks a literal male god to change gender to serve him 4) Stupid MC with Stupid decisions
Let me be honest .. story is not my taste bcz MC's a big big simp + Dumb + he is a boot licker of girls of his first party that he couldn't even understand he was being a door mat for 3 years... untill the god/goddess point it out.. I honestly hate such mc.. so i quti. ...
MC is supposedly supposed to be good at analyzing etc but then when given op skills and asked to custom have something anything he says he wants a dude to genderbend to a big b00b girl oh and translator constantly calling b00bs bears? like what This part already made me want to quit but when I read further its just honestly stupid Expected an intelligent mc but didnt get one
Really good writing quality but unfortunately i dont have coins to spend to continue and fuck paying for coins(i already spent $100 on this site)
just uninspiring garbage, MC is also trash, so disappointed with novels on here these days, well that's about all I have to say.
MC literally is a sucker. Teammates stepping on him for more than a year and guess what, "Oh,she's pretty so I'll save her face". Doesn't reprimand anyone but want the better for them. Author wants a side-villain and also a potential love interest but the progress is just meh. Also,guy got his level resets in exchange for legendary class and didn't bother to level up for several dozen chaps. He knows he's going to deal with nasty and hotheaded people and decided; "oh let me just deal with them before leveling up" bruh you're gon die from that you're literally a level 0. That's literally all the highlights,you can focus on the world lore but it's literally not going to be mentioned much during the whole drama which continues after the paywall. I'd say don't waste your time on this,but if you're just like me then keep reading.
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