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An avid Xianxia reader suddenly gets what he always wanted. He wakes up in a real cultivation world. The only problem? Maybe it was never really his dream after all.
Now, faced with the harsh reality of what cultivation truly involves, with endless realms to climb, countless worlds to ascend, and an abundance of arrogant young masters to deal with, despair starts to creep in.
Fortunately, his golden finger was not missing, and a mysterious system appears in his mind.
Now, armed with elders, ancestors, and a sect leader, he no longer feels completely overwhelmed.
"At least I do not have to do everything alone... well, technically, I do. After all, they are my avatars."
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Notes:
- The avatars are directly controlled by the MC, like multiple bodies sharing the same mind.
- Despite the MC’s multiple bodies, only his main body will be involved in any romance.
- As for the update schedule: I try to release chapters daily except Fridays when there are no updates. The standard update time is around 4 AM GMT, but this can vary.
- If you enjoy the story, please consider leaving a review! And for those interested, you can support me on Patreon and read ahead.
This is an original story written by TIGR4, not a translation of a novel. Just adding this line to avoid misunderstandings since the title sounds very Chinese... which is intentional.
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I can't believe I lived long enough to see a cultivation story where the characters seem like real people, the system is balanced, the growth is constant and the MC's personality is very human, not absolute evil or absolute good, but someone with greed, desires, lust but who, like any normal person, holds back and tries to be a good person (and no, the MC doesn't seem forced but natural, being good when he can, but always taking into account his own desires and feelings).
Well... it's very good! Having a Chinese fantasy with a Western perspective is much more enjoyable to read, mainly because the mentality is similar, so we can identify much more with the MC, this story is still young (70+ chaps), but I already see great potential.
- The story is, seemingly, made without Ai. Whilst being of really good quality. There’s nearly no errors. - It's original, maybe there’s a cliche here and there, but it wouldn’t be a xianxia story without them. - The MC is realistic, whilst not being a mûrder hobo. - There’s an engaging romance early on that doesn’t feel rushed, and we don’t have to read through an MC being so dense that it takes 200+ chapters for it to develop. - He’s strong, but he doesn’t feel invincible, and while he’s not a coward, he’s still cautious. - His cheat might be the most original one of any stories I’ve read. The only real complaints I have is that there isn’t enough chapters, and that there are a lot of lengthy explanations in multiple chapters. And one thing I would say is that, instead of saying his avatars names, you should just say the position they have. Finally, this is one off, if not the best cultivation story I have had the pleasure to read.
Absolutely captivating, I love that he isn't a typical young master and i like the Robin hood early parts, where the familis where robbed lol, the writing is impeccable and easy to understand, keep up the fantastic work
I appreciate the wonderful, marvelous, excellent effort you have put into this work. Here's my graceful vote of thanks 😃👍💎. Ok, Enough flowery words... But do keep it up! 💎.
Writing Quality: I barely noticed any grammar errors, and that really means a lot to me. Stability of Updates: Well, there are 85 chapters in just two months—I think that's pretty impressive. Story Development: It's xianxia, so you know what to expect. That said, the avatar system is pretty unique, and I'm really enjoying reading about it. The romance is pretty good in my eyes—some people might think it's rushed, but if the alternative is 500+ chapters of the MC being dense, I’ll definitely take this. Character Design: Nothing particularly special, but I’m having fun, and that’s what matters. World Background: We're gradually learning more about the world as the story progresses, and that’s been fun to experience. Note: I'm not a critic and I don’t write reviews often, so take my words with a grain of salt. I just think it’s a good story and wanted to write this in hopes of it getting more attention.
This is one of the most well written cultivation novels I have read. It has one of the most realistic portrayals of love and the main character seems realistic. At most the side characters are a bit cliche, but it makes sense in universe and they are based of the “young master” cliche. It has great humor and it flowed smoothly till I stopped at ch 25. All in all, 10/10 novel.
I have not read it yet, this is just a review to support the author on his first original story. I will update this review in the future depending on if I like where the story is going or not. Until then good luck author!
You can read it without knowing Xianxia terminology or general Xianxia stories. The book explains them clearly and explains the reasons for the clichés. -I stopped reading Xianxia years ago, but I thought this book was worth reading because the premise was interesting. That was a mistake. I'm starting to enjoy it again. I'm even starting to get angry at the author because the book has 200 chapters. -I love the story. Mc is a sweet, good person, and in later chapters, we see this approach rub off on the other characters. He makes his surroundings better. He loves Xianxia, not like the whiny, world-bashing whiners he is. He also has a very sweet romantic relationship, and there were some scenes that made me smile with joy. Mc's abilities and potential are what draw me in most. Why? Xianxia generally has multidimensional worlds: lower dimensions, middle dimensions, upper dimensions, imperial dimensions, heavenly dimensions, and so on. And there aren't just a few of these; there are hundreds. Mc's strength allows him to spread his sect to dozens of worlds. Or, it can act without fear of reaching higher dimensions. -The story has pacing issues from time to time, but this improves later. (Have you ever read "Nine Star Hegemon Body Arts" or "A Regressor's Tale of Cultivation"? It's not as absurd as the pacing and the main characters' inability to become stronger.) -One aspect I personally dislike, but which is slowly changing, is Xianxia itself. The beauty of Xianxia is generally its large population and abundance of powerful groups and individuals. Massive wars erupting suddenly, forbidden love conflicts between two lovers, the young master's arrogance, Elders betraying themselves to improve themselves, tournaments, treasure hunts, necromancers with ulterior motives, etc. I'm eagerly awaiting the gradual increase in these.
And one of the best stories I've ever seen!!! Seriously, it has everything I wanted in a Crops story that I'd travel the world to just see the progress up close. There is a very human protagonist who, whenever he spoke, I could identify with him. A wonderful sect building that doesn't start out being invincible in the world. A fair system and not like what I'm used to. A charismatic Roman and impressive personalities of the avatars. Congratulations to the author because I lived to read this wonderful story!!!
Absolutely loved it!!! Chapter 124 and I don't want you to stop! I read all the available chapters yesterday night and was completely shocked when there was none left... I really loved this novel and hope you continue with it!! Great work, chefs kiss!
I just finished reading your story, and I can't stop thinking about how naturally it could translate into a comic. The world-building and character depth are incredible. I create commissioned comics and illustrations, and your story sparked a few concepts right away. I have no expectations; I just wanted to share how much it resonated with me. If you'd ever like to see how it could be visualized in art form, feel free to reach out to me on Discord (bennett_lol) or Instagram (@eve_verse_).
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author is your writing style intensional or translation?. bc its like the same feeling i getting from chinese translation
for me this isn't good but not bad either *for those asking if this is a harem novel I don't know the mc seems head over heels in the blonde like loyal husband so I would say it's scam that author should remove the harem tag to bait readers * as pacing or story development umm so slow??? you will get bored 😪 till the latest chapters * the characters they seems alive ngl 😅 so yeah that 's it 👍
Hello! I am Tigr4! This is my first original story and the second one I've posted, with the first being a fanfiction. I won’t talk about my first work posted because it was quite disappointing, and I made a lot of mistakes with it. But this one is different… I think. Here are some things you can expect from this story: First: A reasonably decent romance, I believe, and fun to read. Second: A character with a mindset very different from typical Xianxia protagonists. He’s not obsessed with perfection at every step, and as strange as it sounds, it actually makes sense. Every Xianxia protagonist seems obsessed with achieving perfection, often making their journey much harder than if they were simply "normal." Why face 500 million celestial tribulation lightning bolts when the usual is just 9? All for a power that supposedly allows fighting between realms, yet in the final stages of cultivation, perfection often doesn't make much of a difference, and, most of the time, they can barely defeat someone just a few levels above them within the same realm. The fact is, as surprising as it may seem, they pursue this perfection and nearly die countless times for it. And what’s the ultimate goal? Immortality! They almost kill themselves repeatedly, relying on "plot armor" just to survive the disasters they themselves cause in the pursuit of immortality. Typical features of perfection in Xianxia stories: fighting between realms, and a slow, problematic level-up progression compared to what the MCs should reach. My MC will only pursue "near-perfection," fight between realms, and have a much faster level-up progression. Third: What kind of second was that? Is this crazy author insane?! Fourth: In the first 5 chapters, I messed up the word count, and they ended up being short. I made the following chapters much longer, and by chapter 12, they already exceeded 15,000 words. The average now is 1,500 words or more, excluding the first few chapters. Fifth: There is no fifth point. Sixth: Leave some Power Stones and happy comments, don’t disrespect me, or I’ll cry! Seventh: In the first 13 chapters, the MC is quite lonely. Personally, I like the story more from chapter 14 onwards. Eighth: Eighth. Ninth: Oh, I just remembered now that this is a list of what to expect...