Özet
World War 3 happens, and humanity is deleted from Earth.
The last survivor of humanity, A man named Edward Elric gets thrown into DC universe around 1200 BCE with 10 class cards containing the souls of heroic spirits, and a little extra something inside him.
Follow him on his journey as he walks through history, and finds his place in this dark universe, becoming a beacon of Hope.
This will be dark but with humor and interesting stuff , along with some major character deaths. Mc will be a bit edgy at first, but he'll grow out gradually.
There will be eventual multiverse travel. This Story will also be posted in Royal Road under same account and story name
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This is the first time i'm writing a review in webnovel, but i need to, because the story is amazing. I always liked the idea of fate powers in others universes, mainly on DC, that is one of my favorite universes. The story is awesome. I just hope you don't drop the novel and finish it, even if it takes a long time. Also, are you going to post a chapter every single day? Not that i'm complaining, but take care of yourself and don't burnout. Amazing story!! Love from Brazil!!
Let’s all be honest one of the best dc fic that start in the past it’s a interesting take even with the fate add on but don’t cry for any little mistake nothing is truly perfect we just got to carry hope
Honest Analysis. ===== The fanfic is genuinely good up to a point. Writing Quality: Very good, the author writes better than many others out there(Fanfic author only). [5.0] Update Consistency: One chapter per day. [5.0] Story Development: Initially, incredible. Over time, poor decisions were made, causing the story's development to slow down, become less interesting, and become increasingly monotonous. [3.0] Character Design: I like the way the author develops the protagonist. The protagonist is genuinely well-written up to a point. The same goes for the other characters, although there are one or two characters that aren't so well-written. [3.0] World Context: Very well-written, due time was taken to develop the world and not make it too monotonous. But after a while, TOO MUCH TIME was given to the world. [4.0] ===== Overall, the fanfic is good up to a point, but then it starts to decline significantly. The author didn't know how to handle the story after making the protagonist have children, and so the focus of the story completely changed without any warning. There were still many good, interesting, and intriguing things to come. I was personally very excited for the events of modern times, but due to the birth of the protagonist's children, modern times weren't very pleasant at all. The protagonist lost focus; he's no longer the protagonist. The league and his other characters completely took over the chapters, and now the protagonist only appears briefly and only takes action after everyone else has tried everything. He's become the kind of character who's only appreciated when the protagonist of the story is someone else. The kind of character who appears whenever the protagonist is in trouble. Overall, the decisions were pretty bad. I say this because this kind of attitude toward the Protagonist isn't necessary for the story to develop or be enjoyable. Original stories like LOTM, Shadow Slave, etc., demonstrate this very well. The author didn't know how to divide the focus correctly, and in the end, it became a monotonous mess. Final Score: 3.8/5.0. I personally really enjoyed the story, but now it's a tremendous effort to get through a single chapter. It might be something truly personal and I'm just being nitpicky, so I recommend giving it a try and see what you think.
I really liked how you used the powers and battles, the way he deals with hope even though he's very Superman but without the substance. What made me put it down is the romance, this narrative with Hera it was forced to the extreme and then the forced marriage also, everything very poorly done and embarrassing, she is so annoying. I tried everything to continue because of the battles but this Hera is unbearable
This is a very good story, but the further it goes, the more it resembles a vinaigrette. Too much is mixed together, which devalues everything. The second thing that spoils everything is the vile harem. The hero, like a butterfly, "pollinates" any flower that he can. After which he forgets about the past "flowers", and new ones.
In the vast ocean of garbage translations and terrible smut on this website, being able to find a story worth reading is a pain. This story, however, isn’t AI-generated or a chinese translation. From start to current chapter, this fanfic has been fun, compelling, and not bogged down with filler to pad the word count. Is this FF perfect? No, but it is good at what it’s trying to do. MC is not a power-hungry idiot seeking to rule the world or a horny moron chasing every girl wanting to create an infinite harem. MC does have 3 wives currently. MC starts off by witnessing the end of humanity by being the last surviving human to die in a nuclear apocalypse, proceeds to get isekia’d, and immediately gains a cyclops bro. Won’t give more info cause of spoilers. I think this story is worth reading, and I hope some of you give it a shot.
A very good story, the beginning made me think a little of a Chinese novel MC but it calmed down quickly and matured. I am very happy to have given him a chance, I am now eagerly waiting for the new chapters!! Keep it up author!!! I just hope that the harem doesn’t grow too much and especially that Diana wouldn’t be really weird for him to add his adoptive daughter to the harem. (Reverso)
Character Development - 3/5 World Building - 4/5 Romance- 3/5 Storywise - 4/5 At the start, Mc was chill and uncaring of his situation and antagonistic about the gods after finding out they exist, but later becomes vengeful and angry during the 10 chapters after one decides to punish him for his attitude (Obviously you’re getting punished when you’re talking smack). Later chapters, his behavior and character improves significantly and is more mature and wiser. The story shows how the MC effects history and the interesting details about it throughout the story. The romance feels rushed with rushed by how fast certain characters develop feelings but are…tolerable as the relationships last in millennials (And one of few stories that have death as romance.) All in all, the stories not bad and would recommend giving it a try
Of course I rate it 5 star, I wrote it after all xD This story has been on my mind for a while, and I just wrote the first 3 chapters after reading the other Dc/ fate fanfic that was dropped, then forgot it 💀 As a Nasuverse fan, I felt this could be a very interesting concept. And the power scaling also matches the universes. But I didn't want to follow the usual trends. I always look to bring something different and fresh in my stories. So I addeded a few twists of my own. Hopefully this will also not disappoint you. And remember folks..... It's all according to keikaku 😎
Good story, it’s okay if it doesn’t skip right to cannon the authors building shit up. I am a little confused on how it will work cause like will the us even come to be after all his interventions? Other than that the power is cool, kinda like Shazam turned to the extreme. Maybe he should be the one to create Shazam now that he conquered the Greek pantheon.
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This fic is pure chaos in the best way. When i first started i would never thought i would go through all this chapters, but here i am. Initially, I was attracted by an interesting concept, but it ended up being far more than that. The world-building is huge and ambitious, blending DC, Fate and alternate history. It’s funny, emotional, and over-the-top in all the right ways. Not perfect, but definitely memorable.
Genuine so peak, only regret is discovering it too early, if I discovered it later I’d have more to read
I could say, in my full absolute no kidding that this, is possibly one of the greatest DC fanfictions, the main character itself is neither good nor evil just....human. He makes mistakes but takes responsibility, he has desires like any human, he is more than human and yet not a god for he is Savior of mankind.
This shit is peak. Peak. This is argumentavly the best story on Wevnovel I have ever read o all of my profiles. I hope you continue.
Love this story and can’t wait to see what you got cooking for present time.
Perfect!! An op mc from the start yet not boring. Absolutely phenomenal style of writing both in the case of world building or fights. Daring to change the canon right from the start. Hope the quality of writing stays consistent throughout the story. Definitely a good read.