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Fast & Furious as Brian O'Connor with a system
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Guy ends up in Fast & Furious with a Sign-in System, as Brian O'Connor, yes the stud muffin. Poorly Written, Characters will act out of Character, male fantasy, stupid system, dumb mc.
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Poorly written, Out Of Character-characters, male fantasy, stupid system, dumb mc.
It ruins the characters with the nonsense about threesomes and such, because it makes them flat, lacking any dignity. It would have been much better to have handled a secret relationship dynamic if you want to make the character a womanizer. Although, for me, the best thing would have been to simply create a romantic storyline between Brian and Letty and Mia alone, without Mia or Dom knowing, where Bryan eventually falls in love with Letty. Trying to maintain the characterization and character of the characters. It's also not necessary to justify Letty cheating on Toreto by first making Toreto a cheater or an idiot. That would have given the story more credibility and impact, instead of wish fulfillment and characters driven only by lust.
Great work so far. Keep up the great work, this fic can be developed so much. Can’t wait to see what comes of it. …………………………………………..,………………………………………………………………………:………………………………………..
That’s some story bro plz update it regularly and btw truly Paul Walker will be remembered for his amazing contribution to the FF SAGA
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This is my first review, there are few chapters, but I remember that there was one like this before. As long as it sticks to more or less the same theme, it remains interesting and readable for me (my English is not as good as I would like, so I often use Google translation to read) Everything that the author himself wrote in the reviews is, as it were, correct, if someone does not like this, then you can read the first one, but even after that it is unlikely to continue. I am a fan of this after the Chinese novels with the change of names from Naruto to pumpkin.[img=strong]
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Hi, this is my first review, and I'm writing it in English because it's not my native language, so please forgive me for any mistakes. I've read a lot of different stories, and this is the first one I've liked. Even if you make a mistake, it's not a big deal. You can always rewrite or correct it later. Just keep going, because this story has the potential to become very popular. Don't listen to anyone and keep making this story. I and many other readers believe in you.
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one of the best fanfics I've ever read so far, i know there is only like 11 chapters but I really hope the author continues this
It's a good idea to make some changes to the Fast and Furious saga; I've always felt it was very poorly utilized, it has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work and don't get discouraged.
Você tem meu aval por suas outras histórias se existe um porém e aquele que você não terminar todas elas, enfim ansioso por mais S2.
Very Good I like the whole idea about Brian O’Connor being together with Mia and Letty, Also could you do more shameless novels? Those are my favorite. And there was a shameless novel a couple months ago I forgot it’s name and it got deleted or something but it’s not even in your various dropped fan fix/Ideas.
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thanks for the chapter I pretty much ditched all of my authors for your book this is absolutely Great please keep writing don't let anyone tell you any different
Keep Writing This Dont Drop This I Will Find You