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First Legendary Dragon: Starting With The Limitless System
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He died. Not by fate, not by accident, but as collateral in a hunt between beings beyond mortal comprehension.
And yet… death was only the beginning.
Chosen by a mysterious entity known only as Echo, a sarcastic soul from Earth is offered a chance at a second life. Gifted with ten draws from a divine treasury, he obtains powerful treasures, a rare bloodline, and a mysterious system known as the Limitless System.
But what begins as a straightforward reincarnation takes a twisted turn when two dragon inheritances, Thunder and Fire collide within him.
Reborn not as a man, nor as a beast, but as an unknown species, a fusion of human and two True Dragon Inheritances, he awakens in a scorched battlefield beside a dragon egg, unaware that his birth was witnessed by fate itself.
After surviving the near-fatal clash of legacies within him, he emerges anew… no longer Zaroth, but Primus Xal’Zaryon Drakonis, a name that shakes the very fabric of mana around him.
With his soul, body, and bloodline perfectly harmonized between human and dragon, Primus sets out into an unfamiliar world ruled by ancient clans, dangerous beasts, and kingdoms teetering on the edge of Eternal War.
But power always draws attention, and with the secrets of his origin, the Limitless System at his side, and a destiny marked by a Primordial-level Mark of Fate, enemies will rise from shadows unknown.
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I suppose after reading since before the book went premium, and being willing to go for the privilege chapters to get the new updates faster... I should write a review... That being said, I absolutely love this book. As 0mni_Dragon said as well, it hits all the right spots, and Primordial_Seven has kept it clean and consistent in the writing. I don't see myself walking away from this book, and look forward to all the chaos and fun that there is to be had!!!
well this story just got booted out of my library. i really dont want to waste more time than i already did on this even though its currently free to read. this story is one of those that lack content per chapter. 90 chapters and he accomplished nothing. he reincarnated got those bloodline upgrades in the beginning, awakened, and bought a slave accroding to systems recommendation and thats it. just recently he picked up a sword for the first time.... 90 chapters to start on his swordmanship training, it'll probably take another 90 for him to reach rank 1 mage and this dude is out to master all affinities and professions? with so little content per chapter i can't advise anybody to pay for this. you simply won't get your moneys worth. if its free, give it a shot otherwise don't waste your time and money
I'm 176 chapters in, and the protagonist still hasn’t been in a single meaningful fight. Side characters constantly praise his "hard work," but in reality, he achieves things with minimal effort after only a few tries—it feels unearned. The repetition is also getting out of hand; how many times do we need to hear about him taking a bath or getting out of bed? So much of the story feels like filler at this point, with little progress or development, and it would honestly be more accurate to tag this as a slice-of-life series. It's been a frustrating read—I'm often skimming through chapters and still not missing anything important. I've stuck with it this long because I hate dropping a story that might eventually become a hidden gem, but right now, it feels like I’d have to wait another 200 chapters for that payoff—if it ever comes. I don’t mean to be overly harsh—I’m just disappointed. I had hopes for the story, and it’s frustrating to feel like it’s going nowhere anytime soon
Score- 6.5/10 Critical review: S in potential but D in character The first few chapters really pulled me in. It didn’t start with the same tired transmigration trope you see everywhere. Instead, we got a setup that actually felt fresh. The ten lucky draws at the beginning were a fun hook, and I thought it set the stage nicely for something great. Then came a fight scene where two individuals were fighting for the posession of the dragon egg, while not super important to the plot, still managed to make the world feel alive. It was refreshing to see that the world wasn’t just revolving around the MC. But after that, things started going downhill. The biggest issue I have is what I’d call the "Protagonist Aura"—the MC just has insane luck and doesn’t seem to earn anything. Stuff just... happens to work out for him. Take this example: right after finishing assimilating his inheritances, the mc just happens to run into the Helstorm family because they are following a prophecy. They turn out to be super influential, and they basically adopt him on the spot after one conversation. Really? Moments like that stack up, and you start to realize the MC never actually struggles. He doesn’t grow. He just gets handed power after power, and by the end of the first hundred chapters, it’s like he’s just collecting cheat codes. Nothing feels like it’s his. Then there’s the character development—or lack of it. Pretty much every side character the MC meets is immediately fond of him. Like the maids? They’re into him from day one. Sure, he’s nice and maybe easy on the eyes, but is that really enough for the level of affection they show? This keeps happening. Over the 100 chapters I read, most of the characters felt either flat or straight-up boring. They’re more like cutouts than actual people: the loyal servants, the doting grandparents, the flirty princess, the rival classmate—you know the type. They don’t grow, and their relationships with the MC are so one-sided it’s hard to care about any of them. For me, character development is what makes a story worth sticking with. But here? I just didn’t feel connected to anyone. Honestly, if the MC died in the next chapter, I wouldn’t care. Stick another guy in his place and the story would play out the same way. That’s how empty it all feels. In the end, it’s a book with a cool setup, but no real emotional weight. Just a bunch of forgettable characters going through the motions in a world that feels like it's on rails.
SLOW.............. It's not like I don't enjoy normal stuff. But when the writer writes about morning breakfast, taking a bath & blah blah blah in detail every single day. I don't really think it's worth it. Well if you have unlimited money then enjoy wasting your time.... .
First serious fight- chapter 250s. A fact. Barely 50 chaper story done but milked until 250. System's " AI is actually useless, only there for word-count. MC does inner monologue all the time and keeps using words like "I have plans for it", "it's going to be an important asset later on" and what not. Yuck. Author-san views these characters as " characters" himself. He doesn't believe them to be real. So nothing feels real. I had high hopes with the starting chapters honestly. What an L.
painfully slow. SoL is one thing, but to then drag that single thing out with nothing along side it is crazy. up to current release not a single spell learned? no mention of an effort to proceed to the next tier? I've read slow novels before, but at least there was interesting stuff happening during the slow parts. this is just painful. this novel is so slow ive memorized, and studied the things they are studying in the novel just from reading through it. make that make sense.
i will never understand 'dragon novels' where the mc looks just like a normal human. Come on in a novel with dragon in its name at least have his normal form have some kind of dragon characteristic. And i just got happy that he has dragon scales in his normal form, and in the next chapter, it instantly gets replaced.
it's not that bad actually but at same time not that good the pacing is super slow and gets boring as we read
Great job, that's all I can say. I've read up to chapter 28, so far I like everything. A request to the author from a humble reader, do not remove the dragon's instincts and do not make him more human, rather make him more of a dragon than a human. It would be interesting to read about a super stingy "man" who will fight for every gold piece and kill everyone who steals his treasures. That's it.
After reading the first few chapters, I can't stop checking for the latest release. Really enjoying it so far!
200 chapters in and almost no real story development. keep getting the same he trains, took a shower with his maids and the one girl who doesn't speak & he eats dinner. No real enemies yet, no suspense, everyone "likes" him. it doesn't feel like anything is ever really at stake so what are we doing here?
I believe it’s time I write a review. With that being said, absolutely fantastic book. A lot won’t like how slow it is and may not understand why the MC does what he does but it all its reasons that are slowly coming together. It’s definitely a WIP but it’s worth it. The characters are very well defined and thought out. The world is slowly being built upon as we fall deeper into the adventure of the MC. The writing quality is amazing as well as the eye to detail. Again I will say it is a story that is slowly built upon and that’s okay. Can’t wait for more releases so the adventure can continue.
I get that he’s a new born and needs to be lowkey but man cmon he has two TRUE DRAGON bloodlines whereas dragons are known for their pride??? Yet somehow his weak tiny little human bloodline is Overpowering TWO TRUE dragon bloodlines and then for someone being a dragon he has no care for his true name or respect for himself it’s crazy how he acts so human like I can nit pick at more by not my type of read
Hola, nunca escribo reseñas, pero me gustó tanto el libro que voy a escribirla, y lo haré en español ya que me es más fácil. Básicamente me encantó todo hasta ahora, no pude leer todos los capítulos ya que tengo que pagarlos x.x pero como dicen en otras reseñas la novela te da todo como esperarias de una buena obra, no es contradictorio en sus datos, lleva una buena velocidad de historia, no se me hace aburrida, hay muchas novelas que tienen buena premisa( la cual no es que sea extremadamente original en esta pero es bien elaborada) pero aburren a los 10 caps, en esta no, de alguna forma te atrapa por la forma bien escrita que está planteada, básicamente paro aquí para no dar spoiler, espero que continúe así hasta el final.[img=update]
I really dont know how anyone can enjoy reading this. He wakes up, eats with his family, goes to the academy rinse and repeat for more than 100 (up to like 250) chapters. Repeats stuff all the time while talking to Lumi. Like learn to omit stuff my guy, we dont need to read about a guys daily routine of being washed the same exact way a hundred times in a power fantasy novel. Don't waste your time.
One of my favorite books on the site. Lumi may be the best character but Nyss is best girl. #WeWantMaidMagi
I would like to concur with what 0mni_dragon wrote as they said it better than I can as to why I am enjoying the story.
You can ask questions here. And let me say this first, the start is slow and filled with good SoL moments, so either please bear with me on that or just enjoy a peaceful ride till we reach the next part.