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Great Wizard Return to The Original World
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Thousands of years ago she accidentally stumbled into the Magic World
Thousands of years passed, she accidentally returned to her original world. However, the world she knew was no longer like the world as it should be...
[Writing Prompts Contest #74= The Daily Life of Immortals]
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Sıralaması 
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Taşı Bunlar da Hoşunuza Gidebilir
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- Yazı Kalitesi
- Güncellemelerin Kararlılığı
- Hikaye Gelişimi
- Karakter Tasarımı
- Dünya Arka Planı
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That's why I like original novels. Most of the stories are unique and can't be found in the official novels. Though it's not as good as the official novels, but I like this novel. Keep going! purple purple
I think your story is the best of the 74 prompts. It's the most original storyline with good writing and decent amount of updates. While it's good to listen to advice, don't worry too much about any critiques. You're doing well.
I like the the story. though it still a bit messy in early chapter, it still readable and your writting improved so well. Like it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great novel, great author. please dont drop this. Vote vote vote~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~ ~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~~\(≧▽≦)/~
It is good but is not good as one punch girl you will try it it's awesome you will became a huge fan of it it doesn't have twists and turns and one punch girl has it all .
This is a great novel, tho it only has little chapters but the story developed well. Characters and plot story were written well. I hope you don't drop this...
Kept it up 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍