Is It Wrong For Me To Start With Three Skills In Danmachi ?!

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Pirulitinho

I just want to know one thing: why in chapter 2 did MC say he wanted to get stronger and develop in the Shadows, but... out of nowhere he joins the Loki Familia??? Seriously, man??? How is he going to develop in the Shadows, as he said, while being in the Loki Familia??? There were so many families, man. For example, wouldn't Miach be a good choice? Just him as an adventurer and no one to meddle in his affairs other than Miach himself. And since the Miach family makes potions, it would be great for him, because, well... his family makes potions, right? lol

LV 2

Brady_Lustlara

I made it to chapter 12 and I just couldn't take it anymore. The MC is just straight up annoying with how he has to describe every little thing before finally swinging his f*ucking sword. He just talks and talks nonstop to himself with little actually going on. Pretty much the entire 10 chapters is just him talking to himself which is plain boring. Maybe it gets better but I won't find out.

LV 4

Murderbanks

This isn't bad, but it got the default pretty much every Danmachi fanfics got, the MC is way too op. It's not op at the level where the guy become level 2 in like one week but it's still bad. Beside that it's actually good.

LV 5

Rayashi

Could you send the raw link, please?. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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AlastorGF

No lei mucho, sinceramente si en la descripción pusiera que se une a Loki directamente ni me molestó en leer esto, me desagrada mucho Loki así que este fanfic no es para mí sinceramente esa diosa es mil veces más molesta para mí que Aqua de hecho preferiría que Aqua fue la diosa de una familia que esa basura de Loki bye

LV 4

CH1LLGUY

just another op mc that somehow gets noticed by all characters. says one thing but does the opposite. Writing and translation doesnt seem bad. like all danmachi fanfics. They like having these wannabe bell vs mino fights. plus overscaling their powers with falna level.

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odeiochinavenenosa

temmm harem isso .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Slicknation

Is there any romance? Or no romance just wondering

LV 2

yasuramaru_sama

I hope you can continue on till the end of danmachi plot. It's interesting to see bell as a fan boy and looking up the mc as the role model. And when is the mc gonna make a divine weapon for himself and his party?

LV 2

ShinGod

So far I read the author is very dedicated so I hope the author will update quickly --------------------------------------_--------_--------------------------_---------------_----------------_---------------------

LV 3

Manny_Douriet

Definitely enjoying this story can't wait to see what shenanigans the MC will pull next as he's practically aiming for the money![img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

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Kien_Abbott_6354

What is the original name of the fanfiction?

LV 14

mickro

The MC is a combination of a OP Chinese, and a Virgin Japanese Harem Protag. He is first introduced as a supposed adult with a cautious personality but never shows it even once so far in 30 chapters and is a complete blabber mouth with a lack of caution and no backbone in front of any women.

LV 4

akio

Havent read a good Danmachi fanfic in a while, this was an enjoyable read!

LV 4

Daoist9fD3dr

Overall I'm liking the story and don't think there are any problems with the story .

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CrisP22

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Hey! I just wrapped up your story and oh my gosh, it was amazing! The scenes played in my mind like a full-on movie so bright, so alive, so beautifully written. I kept thinking how cool it would look as a comic or illustrated series. I’m an artist and would love to collaborate if you’re ever up for it. No pressure at all just wanted to share how much I loved your work! You can reach me anytime on Discord (elsaa.uwu) if you’d like to chat or see my work. Thanks for creating such a fantastic story! Warmly, Elsa love

LV 3

lazY_b0nes

A jolly good work of translation and the characters are well developed, the storyline is quite good as well with a refreshing tangent away from the protagonist following cult. The mc is quite a work in progress but I got some hopes for this one. Overall, it's a good read.

LV 4

DarkCusco

Uma das melhore obras, tem potencial, li até o capitulo 364, minha única critica é que os capítulos estão demorando muito para vir, mas é normal pq eles precisam ser feitos, no demais esta tranquilo.

LV 2

Randy_Oropeza

Is fanfiction is amazing I feel that that way the characters are portrayed is interesting. They have their own personalities and moments. However I do think that the mc needs a little work but overall he is an incredible character. I hope that the author keeps at it as I am sure that is story will stand out and has already stood out to the fanfiction community. So keep at it author don’t give up you have a good fanfiction going. Your fans will be cheering you on your journey so don’t give up.❤️❤️