/ Fantasy / My System Increases My power Every Day Without Missions and Levelling
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Richard originally thought he would live comfortably in another world because he was reincarnated as the son of a noble family where his mother was a very powerful figure.
However, unbeknownst to him, because he was born without talent, his mother did not want him, considered his birth a disgrace that should be hidden, and even asked her butler to send him to an orphanage.
His life looked like it was going to be like the main characters in novels who had to live a bitter life in another world.
However, just when he was expelled, a System appeared, a completely different System where it would enhance his talents and powers without him having to do anything.
Even though he was just quietly and leisurely living in his orphanage, his strength was still increasing little by little.
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Bir değerlendirme yazWhile the premise is fun and scratches an itch, I do not recommend it. This story unexpectedly has a sociopathic villain MC. He starts as a child with an adult mind so I gave him slack; however, after 100 chapters, it is devoid of any healthy relationships or meaningful dialogue or character growth. The MC often ignores what is said to him and ruins any attempt of friendly interaction or act of goodwill for no reason. I'm most worried after noticing a romance tag because the MC and story aren't capable of one, but I also stopped rooting for him to get stronger.
The world is pretty good and characters are okay, but MC just isn't for me. He is basically another chinese protagonist with a system, he behaves like everyone is a potential enemy and all opportunities are to be his. So basically, since everyone is a thief and a killer, so is he, only he is going to be the biggest of them all. The woman who taught him a mind control art made the biggest mistake, I tell you. And he is okay with enslaving women too. Honestly, I don't find myself rooting for MC even if he fought against his mother who abandoned him at birth. Cause I don't find him to be that different. He never really considers trading with someone for something he wants, his first thought is always: "How do I extort/plunder them?" He isn't the worst I've seen, but he just has no likeable qualities, at least to me.
MC is petty and braindead. You can't like this MC, legit doesn't know what magnanimity is. Heck he repays goodwill with a slap in the face. Other than that, he has an overpowered cheat and overpowered guardian, but, has to repeatedly put himself in danger without reason. I'm not even against putting mc in danger, but, if you plan to write a story like that, don't give him an OP guardian or a cheat that gives you strenght without taking risks.
So far extremely captivating. I’m really enjoying the character development and am anxious to see where this goes.
The story had a strong start, but the character interactions seemingly get more and more contrived. Everyone is always talking with others with an agenda in mind, and it feels like there are only a couple of genuine interactions. The MC also seemingly always gets the worst part of any deal made, which makes no sense since he almost always has the leverage. I applaud the author for the effort.
It’s good until now and I hope he dose not ruin the story and the plots just for the sake of HAREM! I really really hope it continues like this!
Honestly, I love the power setup with the codex,arcane arts and grimoire. Yes the mc completely ruins it for me. Like I hate a too forgiving mc as mush as the next guy, but this is just rubbish. He scams people who are kind to and keep asking for more than he can give. Worst of all he believes it’s a fair deal 😂😂.
The MC is too reckless while pretending to be low-key. The system rewards seem to be a little random in timing and content. Also doesn't have the best character design. Overall I'd say it's average, nothing experience ruining but nothing great or awesome, perfect for passing time i suppose.
I should point out that this is my opinion, so you may or may not agree with what everyone else thinks. The main character was not poorly written; on the contrary, she was well planned. however, in the global scenario, other characters (supporting characters) are too stupid. In a world where a girl walks into an alley and kills people without feeling a shred of remorse, they treat the protagonist too well, as if everything he asked for was completely reasonable, which often ends up being not so reasonable, creating a kind of disagreement with the world scenario itself, where wizards and people only care about themselves and one must be careful at all times to stay alive, where the mother tells her daughter to get married simply because she thinks it will be best for the family. It seems to me like a novel where there is a kind of brain disconnect only with the protagonist, because not everyone knows about the MC's past and others wouldn't even care about killing him anyway. Well, I haven't read the more advanced chapters yet, but for now, that's my opinion.
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Spoileri GösterThe world background it's pretty good but the MC ruined the story for me, he's portrayed as a reincarnated person who says that wants to be low key and avoid trouble, well he's not, he kills a person who was just sitting using one of his strongest attacks (chap. 102) just because he wanted to give trouble, that was in the middle of the capital he just arrived the previous day in the middle of the day and then he says he's to weak, he searches for enemies everywhere with no reason, if he's a villain MC I wouldn't mind, but an arrogant and stupid MC without two cents of common sense, no thanks, I mean at the least a sociopath who kills for joy know when to stir trouble and how in a smart way. And the side characters..... well honestly they feel all hypocrites the kind you don't like or stupid with actions that make no sense with their character.
Spoileri GösterCrow you better not drop this one, or Im actually gonna lose it. BTW the story building is good and the power system seems flushed out, the only confusion i have it how the tiers work. But I kinda get it. The characters don’t seem to be surface level, and have uniqueness to them. The world is kinda hard to understand with 2 kingdoms i can think of being HolyStar, and HolyLight. Though for now our MC is in a small corner of the world, so It is understandable that the whole thing hasn’t been explained yet… (nobody likes huge info dumps) Either way this is good, and I hope Crow stays with it.
Actually, it's pretty good, the world construction and power system are also interesting, but frankly, I'm worried that the author will leave this, it seems that he has a lot of work before, I hope the author doesn't leave this series, it's progressing very well for now.
Richard’s journey hits hard from being rejected by his own powerful mother to quietly growing stronger in an orphanage. The contrast is emotional and beautifully told. I can easily imagine these moments as stunning character panels. 📌 Discord: acelinemonjea_11679 📌 Instagram: AcelineMonjea
Tbh i dont like the time skip of 10 years i dont like queen being captured and probably defiled aswell as how much has changed
Spoileri GösterYazar Dark_Crow1111
overall story has good potential but problem is with mc he is too naive for a reincarnator he says he doesn't want trouble but is seeking trouble everywhere he tells everyone how much power he have without hiding anything he tells his name and age wherever he goes and when someone close to him knows about his deed he ask them to keep secret, i mean wtf, he himself is telling other people about himself and then tell people at orphanage to keep secret author is wasting the potential of the story