Shadow Slave: Error

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Seizay

Peak after peak, what can I say ? First the oldest dream fanfic and now a fanfic with monocle everywhere. Continue with a regular update schedule and I'm sure these 2 fanfics will be at the top

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DEVIL_HP02

Sorry 😞 but I didn't like this ff too much nonsense

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hero4hire

I skimed to the end but can't find his flaw, can someone tell me what it is?

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SkitS

Peak It's so good icl Also it has a good schedule But there is an Error, I just don't know where Time to spam characters ig Jrjdndkdkdhddnskosjfjfbciefbfoskdockenosmfondjoendjffomdnfikenejfore

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Rajiota

This is just too good. Amazing characterization and interactions, clever way of writing their abilities, dynamic fight scenes... The comedy is in point. But there is only one problem, one error with this fanfic:

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Erick_Elias_9072

All the chapters are filled with the protagonist's empty thoughts, who seems to have some kind of mental deficiency. Even the fight, which should be one of the most interesting things in a novel like this, was awful. I really don't understand how this has such a high rating.

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Cigarrillo_Andante

Look, I haven't read at all for the moment, but I love the premise, and the only fact that author is a polite person in this site is already a blessing, so I'm giving this 5 star even if I end up not liking it

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Midnight_Gravity

I think folks are underestimating how good of a writing this story is, because I'm someone who drops fanfics in a heartbeat if there's any OC other than the main character of that particular story, but this story breathed life into the other OCs in such an clever way it's so addictive seriously, Medici is a funny guy but a strong brother as well, he has that lovable bear feeling it the MC disagrees and thinks he's a hot dog 😭 Luna is dope, strong and doesn't give any f*cks frfr the dynamics and exchanges between her and the MC is some of the funniest shit🤣🤣 (low-key I'm rooting for Luna × MC) More importantly the OCs feel alive and the author just did that in a span of one or two chapters, this is peak!!!! The world building has been excellent so far it keeps the atmosphere of what I loved about "Shadow Slave" and the errie vibes of LOTM is slowly seeping in the author keeps it a buck and doesn't do to much or too little this is art, a perfect blend of what I loved about SS and LOTM. Our MC is a perfect blend of wits, mischief and cowardice (though I feel he just likes to call himself a coward because he hasn't shown any cowardly traits whatsoever from my perspective), if anything though the MC has an unusual and strange courage this is the best written MC I've seen all year so far and he isn't cringe but is funny (do you know how difficult it is to do comedy in novels 😭😭) the synopsis doesn't do this justice. I just wish his soul sea as well as Luna and Medici are the Sefirah of their respective pathways then it'll make sense on why they have Beyonder uniqueness and can advance as Beyonders (they are following the Shadow Slave World system but in turn are getting Beyonder powers so they are not Beyonders but they are if it makes sense) despite being in a completely different world.

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KorutoV1

Bro this is just awesome reading your cooking skills are guilty pleasure to my tastes and all jokes are funny and not boring or forced like in most fanfictions i have encountered in my career. Goat Fang Yuan and his perseverence. If you had patreon with 15 or more chapters ahead i would gladly buy it just to read your masterpiece!!

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Daoistwithnowisdom

The author cooked! It’s a parody of common iseakia/fanfic tropes. You will get most of the jokes if you have read other novels on WebNovel. Having some knowledge of LOTM will help you better understand the transmigrators trios power, but you can still read the story even if you haven’t read LOTM. The book made me laugh and I’m excited to see where the story goes!

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Blood_soaked_bar

Honestly, I don’t know what to say. The novel is a good renegade, but the drama aspect is a bit heavy—or at least in the protagonist’s head. I actually like that, by the way. Even with him being a coward, it’s kind of fun. Instead of the usual cowards you feel disgusted by, this guy is a real coward with a mischievous streak, a bag full of circus tricks, and a belly full of sarcasm, which is something I really enjoy. So, good job to whoever wrote this piece of art. Other than that, keep the jokes coming.

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SATTAMX8

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EOTB

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Daoistlfnotv

Author, please read it all. This is a quality fanfic in terms of both content and update time. I read it from beginning to end and can only say "absolutely cinematic" but I know you dropped another fanfic because you found many mistakes, it's okay because it's your first time writing. Even author G3 has many pretty bad character setups. If you say it in a good way, it's character development, but in a bad way, it's inconsistent and this is the problem of a long story like Shanks' arm in One Piece at one time. I haven't read your old fanfic because I don't want to read a story without an ending, so I hope you can write this one slowly and think about the direction of the story better, and the original story seems to be coming to an end and there will be many mysteries revealed, but we have to wait until Christmas. I still have a lot to contribute, but I would be better if I commented on each chapter. Finally, I wish the author can maintain his form and have many good things. (Sorry if the grammar is bad, I'm not good at English but will try to do better in the future, to give the most accurate comments)

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Daoisto3sJDX

I usually never leaves a review even if it is good story, but this has to be the best novel fanfic that I ever laid my eyes on with how it's going. Everything is getting better with each chapter. You cooked with the first volume and can't wait for what you are planning for the rest. 11/10 .--. . .- -.-

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marcelll3214

So i finished forgoten shore arc and i must say this story is very good. I actualy dont like shady mcs like this that are not in spotlight. I would prefer Medici to be mc, but the story is great. I will not let my preferences and bias to lower the scroe for this great fic.

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Lowkeys

This is like my 3rd time writing this, so Imma keep it short Writing quality is decent no major mistakes Updating stability has slowed down recently but overall it's fine Story development is OK Character design is good mix of humor and seriousness Still have no idea why my main account got bombed, not like I was writing anything or being overaly active Meh, not like I was doing anything on that account anyway

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RudeSmile

This is great 10/10, no doubt, that all you need to know tho. My review is quite late, but... well, it's here. Quality is phenomenal, fun and captivating. Author make sure that the characters are the same as the original SS novel and no some caricature. Original characters are great, even if you didn't read LOTM it's still easy to follow and comments can explains all the subtle lore in easy way. Pacing and power level are top notch. Take a look and Praise The Lady! \o/

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binah

the taste of a demoness aint bad........

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MinhN

Good juju, good grammar, good plot. Rate Amon/10. Can't see any trace of amateur AI use if the author even use them at all. I don't even read SS and still able to follow the plot with some light wiki-ing. Never know you can pull of the 3 transmigrators thing this well without compromising the flow of story. The amount of brainrot is peak I would said. Stand proud. You can cook.