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Leon never asked for greatness.
He just wanted to escape his flirty stepbrother and survive another miserable day.
But fate had other plans—delivered by a lightning bolt and a cosmic accident.
Reborn in a brutal world of mana, monsters, and cultivation, Leon starts at the bottom.
No legacy. No allies. No system.
Just seven divine treasure spins.
And then—everything changes.
[Class: Elemental Paragon(SSS)]
A class whispered only in dread. A name that doesn’t exist—only a myth followed.
Along with the class came another gift.
[Ding!]
[Host successfully connected to Cosmic System!]
Unlike the standard system others in his world use, Leon’s was different.
It came with features no one else had—like a mysterious [SHOP], filled with items so rare they bordered on myth. Treasures that could warp reality. Twist fate.
Even in the lowest of the low Earthly Planes, Leon could purchase artifacts of Legendary or even Mythical rank.
But every treasure had a cost—one no amount of gold could pay.
And then there was the [CHAT]. A place where the most terrifying beings in existence—galaxy-shattering Absolutes and universe-warping entities—casually exchanged words.
Like The Keeper of The Dimensions, Lord of Space and Time…
In that chat, Leon was mistaken as one of them.
One of the powerful.
One of the untouchable.
In reality, he was weaker than a worm compared to them.
But that wouldn’t last.
Leon made himself a quiet promise:
'One day, I’ll meet them for real.'
'And when I do…'
'I won’t be mistaken anymore.'
He’ll rise.
He’ll reach the apex.
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#NO Yuri
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aah ! I just love this wn . it got very thing i want . many people are waiting to binge read after 250 plus chap. i was also going to do that but curiosity led me here 😭. i should have waited atleast till 250 chapters . i just want to read more of it
Honestly it started off strong, but it turned into something so disappointing… I’m sure most of us that read these genres just want mindless unga bunga op mc’s that wreck shit with constant combat and exciting battles that get us hooked on our seats. I’m sorry but this ain’t it. I’ve read 60 chapters in and there’s on been pretty much only 2 fights… Most of those 60 chapters are just about the awkward and borderline disturbing relationship between the mc and his master that is grooming him a 10 year old child. This is more of a romance/harem novel than anything else. The author just focuses on the MC’s relationship with his master and blabbers on about hugs nonstop… What a complete shit novel, I had high hopes.
ok y'all might think am capping but so far can we move on into the novel it feels like am reading some romcon Novel, master this master that hug hug hug come on already just move on with the novel, who gives a fu*k like yh I get it, but it's getting too annoying let move into the actual novel the first few chapters were amazing but after the dungeon thing man it's was all about hug hug hug master this master that no cap but we ain't no simp we get it just move on sigh I won't lie I got attracted majorly bcos of his cosmic system I was thinking mc would actually use the system to bargain with the seller or actually use it for something cool ok maybe act like some powerful being getting attention and some discount/ free stuff well so far the begining was amazing and nice but after the dungeon thingy where he grew up it turned to...
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Less to minimal story line and more fluff around one liner. Chapters get smaller and is a mediocre r18. Story progression is super slow
The author likes to pad his words in chapters you have to pay for with useless info this book isn’t worth spending any time reading
There is bit of a struggle with writing sometimes but I am liking the story so far.
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my review is the same as dudu bears. hugs hugs, no fights or story development. hugs hugs grooming by weird master. more hugs. tells master all his secrets when we know about comsic entities. hugs hugs hugs most chapters just a nothing burger. did i say anything about hugs? pretty ever chapter is about hugs. dropped at 69.
Early chapters were good until got turned into fluff, when it started with the student teacher relationship the quality just went down, skipped a few chapters (on 71) and the story didn’t really progress much
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I like the idea of the book and the vision of what he wants. but theres chapters upon chapters of almost copied and pasted sex scenes. iv read all chapters so far as im invested in the overall direction but it seems like ai has alot of input. there are contradictions from the start of the book and later in the book it makes it hard to follow I can skip multiple chapters and still no whats going on. I will keep reading but im really hoping that it changes up a bit.
There isn't much unique in this, but it isn't necessarily bad. A huge drawback is story pacing and constant repetition - sometimes you could skip a chapter or two and miss a lot, other times you could skip 5 and barely anything of importance will be missed. The MC is your typical isekai-ist, that gains a few "seemingly" random items/'cheats' to begin the new life with - a very, very odd start since he's seven while you're reading, and a huge edgelord/cringe mindset until a certain point. if you're bored, give it a go - but don't expect gold.
It started off great with a good concept, so I hope that it doesn’t get dropped.
So good my homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Would've been a banger if not for the amount of chapters dedicated only to sex. I never imagined getting jaded reading sex.
I have to say that the first 100 chapters were crazy, the truth is I loved it, it was something refreshing, a sarcastic and funny protagonist was entertaining but from 101 onwards the novel went straight to the trash why do I say this at the beginning everything was good, a sarcastic MC that I loved the truth, the fight in the dungeon was entertaining, the romance with the teacher and the training was fascinating to watch but then the protagonist became super arrogant, the battles end in a single blow, typical thing in Chinese novels of Xian Xia but what I disliked the most is that he collected hundreds of beggars and put them in his dimension artifact and that they called him god when he only has a minuscule drop of literary power, the MC is at the lowest rung of power, he is devil and he calls him god just like that, it is ridiculous, it is as if the author no longer had any more ideas. It would have been better if he had welcomed all the soldiers and maids. Her teacher and trains them in her dimension and that little by little the story would have advanced she would have met and added people with potential that would have been entertaining not beggars random NPCs that is my way of seeing it as a reader but that is not all after chapter 101 the novel becomes incredibly slow it almost does not advance it becomes monotonous and boring nothing interesting happens it is as if the author did not know what to write and said well let's go back to the arrogant MC and the fights end in a slap like the arrogant young teachers in the Xian Xia novels another thing I want to say is the attitude of the MC several random women have wanted to sleep with him but he rejects them because he thinks he is cheating on his teacher who is his first wife but he has already spoken to her that he wants a Harem he is contradicting himself I am not telling you to add all the women to the harem but having relationships with the girls from time to time would not be bad like a one time thing not that Disney princess romance that I am reading this novel has great potential but for me the author is wasting it as I say that there was a need to collect random NPC beggars and give them treasures and put them in their dimension and that they are calling themselves god or almighty god just to create an empire when it could have been done later in history in the upper worlds with more talented people, I do not see the point from my point of view it seems somewhat desperate to me. The last thing I want to say is that the NPCs in the novels are too submissive and bootlickers; just because they have a little more power, they already kneel and beg for their lives without epic fights; they only feel fear and kneel. Well, that's all. I hope the author continues publishing chapters and improves the novel a bit. English is not my native language, and there may be many orthographic and grammatical errors, but I wanted to express my opinion on the novel.
World Background set up is awesome. The initial power system is awesome, The System is awesome, but then MC becomes so broken [like 1000x times broken] for Lower realm that none of the fights or anything matters anymore. which might change when he goes to higher realm. Writing Quality gets better in later chapters. BUT there's to much filler lines in each chapters often. Story progress at snails place often & then fast forward again. Character Design is decent. There's lot of cringe moments, romance is also depending on if that's your cup of tea, you'll either like it or not. Lot of silly pointless filler moments there to. But overall, worth reading. It just has it's ups [everything System related is that good] & downs [glance over/skip the filler lines].
it was kind of interesting first 190 chapters but later it turns mc into sh*t. and the way he behaves doesn't make your novel seem Harem.
Author here, let me say a few things about the novel. This novel is gonna be an absolute banger, the idea, the world, characters, power system, their relationship, everything would be a delight. The only thing that could hold it back could be my writing; I am not that experienced. However, I hope you guys will give this a try, looking past my inexperienced writing. You can ask for anything you want from me here about the story.