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When Your Feathers Flutter Down to Me
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It all started with a princess and a village...
This is the story of Elisia Felbrun, a princess infamous for her hatred of demi-humans and monster people. However, when one day one of her attempts at greed backfires, she's forced into exile! On top of that, she must stay in the territory of the very people she harbors so much hate for.
Will facing the people she's persecuted for so long make her change her ways? With the help of many, including a harpy she just can't seem to stop thinking about, Elisia will learn way more about the demi-humans and monster people than she ever imagined, as well as herself...
Edited by ZorathX
Cover art by the amazing Baprima-07!
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2Değerlendirmeler
- Yazı Kalitesi
- Güncellemelerin Kararlılığı
- Hikaye Gelişimi
- Karakter Tasarımı
- Dünya Arka Planı
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Life can get crazy and the author is surely busy, so it's unfortunate that updating stability is as low as it is, but the overall quality of the story is great. The chapters are fairly lengthy which allows the readers to get a grasp on the setting as well as the personalities of the characters. The overall themes in the story are easy to understand from the get go. Sadly at this point in time it's still in the process of setting of the premise and we have yet to see an interaction between what would be the 2 main leads. Hoping to eventually see more updates however long that may take.
Your story carried such emotion and cinematic energy that I couldn’t stop thinking about how beautifully it could translate into visual form. The characters, the atmosphere, the pacing everything was crafted with real care. I’m a professional artist specializing in comic panels, and I’d be thrilled to collaborate with you if you ever want to expand your story visually. INSTRA: elsa.uwu