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I tried to read more chapters but as it goes on, the mc is not showing the maturity that the story wants to portray. It' s like a child who only sees white and black.

The concept is great. I just felt it kinda rushed. I don't know if it is because of the Ai. The characters are there, it's just that their personalities kinda differ on the original(bcs of Ai also I think, the way they talked). Kinda loved it at first then got bored when he added Naruto stuff. Kinda misaligned.

The quality is very good. If it keeps going it can be one of the best HP professors ff. Author keep posting ch

i think there's a similar translation existing here

TBH i really like this story, can't wait for next chapters. But the story is very repeated and dragging i think. I really can't understand where the so much hate came from. even with the global threat that will cost all lives on earth, they still want him to die first. Even on what he did, they do not think about what he did to save them. They think when will he die, omega power, that power is mine, etc. The hate i can't explain really.

One of the best fanfic out here. A bit sad that the story ends but hey thumps up for creating a good story.

Why would you still update or post a chapter if you can't even fix the names of the characters? This story has potential to be good.

I don't like how the story becomes incest. It can be good without it. And I don't like the logic on how the mc explained it.

The story has potential. But the writing (translation if tl) is really bad. The author/tl clearly does not understand when to use pronoun it/his/her. It's all mush up. Next one is the naming did the author/tl did not even try to fix it. Another thing is there are paragraphs that just the author thought he/she can try to be more mysterious but did not really able to work on. It will work if the grammar is okay but it's not. I really like the plot here but after dozens of chapters it doesn't even get fixed.

the story and the plot itself is good. It's just the mc is beyond silly and stupid like the author-san described. MC is suffering extremely retardation.