John_Addams_2136

LV 4
2022-09-07 Katıldı Global
Rozetler 3

Moments 8
John_Addams_2136
John_Addams_2136
2 months ago
Posted

V good story plz don’t drop…………………………..,

John_Addams_2136
John_Addams_2136
3 months ago
Posted

Good but grammar mistakes Kaya goes from being male to female to male again bcz u usa he then she and keep alternating so plz fix it and keep it either he or she not both.

John_Addams_2136
John_Addams_2136
3 months ago
Posted

V good but plz make chapter longer and plz don’t drop

John_Addams_2136
John_Addams_2136
5 months ago
Posted

Keep updating first story I read about a defender and not a midfielder or an attacker

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John_Addams_2136
7 months ago
Commented

Thanks love this book plz update consistently whenever you can. And try not make him overpowered straightaway make it a journey where he wins and looses and he learns from his loses .

John_Addams_2136
John_Addams_2136
8 months ago
Posted

Keep updating plz v good story but try to make chapters a bit longer

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John_Addams_2136
John_Addams_2136
9 months ago
Posted

Plz don’t drop its a very good story

John_Addams_2136
John_Addams_2136
1 years ago
Posted

V good story plz don’t drop and update as frequently as u can