Good but grammar mistakes Kaya goes from being male to female to male again bcz u usa he then she and keep alternating so plz fix it and keep it either he or she not both.
V good but plz make chapter longer and plz don’t drop
Keep updating first story I read about a defender and not a midfielder or an attacker
Thanks love this book plz update consistently whenever you can. And try not make him overpowered straightaway make it a journey where he wins and looses and he learns from his loses .
Keep updating plz v good story but try to make chapters a bit longer
Plz don’t drop its a very good story
V good story plz don’t drop and update as frequently as u can
V good story plz don’t drop…………………………..,
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