/ Action / Anime/Cultivation System

Anime/Cultivation System Nguyên gốc

Anime/Cultivation System

Action 72 Chương 1.4M Lượt xem
Tác giả: Marchen

4.52 (31 số lượng người đọc)

Đã đọc
Về Mục lục

Tóm tắt

Kareem Valentine died on earth committing the heroic deed of saving a puppy. After his death, he meant The One True God who grated him several wishes. Being transmigrated into the world of cultivation where men can shatter mountains and split oceans. Watch as our protagonist transform from on Ant into a Dragon going from weak to strong sometimes traveling anime worlds all with the help of his Anime/Cultivation system.

"Tang Ho! You might be a combat master but in front of me your skills are so so"

"Demon King Xuebec! In front of my army, yours is truly lacking"

"Heaven's! Throw lightning at me one more time and see if I don't deflect it back"


I HAVE LONG SURPASSED THE HEAVEN'S!


First time Arthur I'm writing this for fun if you like it thank you for the support. If you don't then I hope you find a better novel. You can always move on to find something batter no need for hating.


[The system doesn't become on anime/cultivation system until chapter 26. Why because I didn't think of this when I just started writing it and now I did so I did some editing to the story and fixed up grammar errors and fusing the systems make it easier for me to write.]

[ I do not own the cover it's Inuyasha's father. The main character looks exactly like the cover. The cultivation stages are from Library of Heaven's path which belongs to the author of library of heavens path.]

General Audiences

Người hâm mộ

  1. queenV
    queenV Đóng góp 6
  2. DaoistDRZ
    DaoistDRZ Đóng góp 2
  3. Antonio_Melendez_1363

Tình trạng nguồn điện hàng tuần

Rank -- Xếp hạng Quyền lực
Stone -- Đá Quyền lực

Bạn cũng có thể thích

31Các đánh giá

4.52

  • Chất lượng dịch thuật
  • Tính ổn định của các bản cập nhật
  • Phát triển câu chuyện
  • Thiết kế nhân vật
  • Bối cảnh thế giới

Chia sẻ suy nghĩ của bạn với người khác

Viết đánh giá
Marchen

I went back and fixed the first chapters. My writing has improved compared to before. I use grammerly so there isn't spelling mistakes but I might still have some. I release chapter's Friday and Saturdays now sometimes Sunday. I hope you all like the story try it out and I would really appreciate you all reviewing my novel.

4yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Fantatic

I enjoy how the story is progressing it's interesting. Keep up the goodwork author. Keep writing chapters and don't drop and I will keep on supporting.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
queenV

Amazing story line. I love how the characters are developed. The mc is really amazing love his personality. Keep the story up looking forward to the rest.

4yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
FurinjiSaiga

I like it good job man little bit of spelling errors but it's fine. I can't wait to read the rest of the story looking forward to it. Keep up the good work.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Kaio_Alxandr

So far I'm enjoy it! You can really tell how your writing style has improved throughout the chapters. Good job man! I would say to be a little more careful with punctuation and be a little more aware of the pace of the story-- should keep the flow from going too fast but don't make it too slow with a bunch of details. Other than that, you did pretty good. Looking forward to more chapters.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
BJB
LV 5 Badge

I really like the character development and all the character s he gathers into his faction. I wish you would update morr often though. ** I like your avatar of Bam

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Jasonenrick

I really liked it how it begins but Bro you make no sense and i really can't get myself to read more . You basically waste all his points and literally everything he has on his gf and wait a minuite isn't she already as strong as Saint 9 -_- -_-. Sorry but this really pisses me off and i really don't get myself to read it with his gf. The first thing she does after they met in the new world is ....nothing. He gave her all this and she just stands ther like it is natural that he does this for her and it pisses me off how he is so weak compared to his gf and lrt's look back. He has 7 wishes and his gf is basically on top of the world from the start and he is like a bug /ant and it would all have been okay if she would be more thankful but she isn't he sents 1 million from 5 million of his points for stones she can use and she doen't even says anything and just stsrts to cultivate ?????? OK i stop writing because i would just get worse . The idea is really great and i would love to read this story if either ... 1. His gf doesn't exits. 2. She is much more thankful to him. 3. You don't make her as strong as she is from the beginning but either the MC should

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Naruto_King

Super anime. I gave this story a 4 star in everything but stability since it uploads daily a lot. It is cool. At times I was kind of bored? It's long. And slow. But then it will be super fast. I don't know. It has good grammar most of the times. Sometimes it fails at that though. It was good though. I liked it.

4yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
RainyLiquid2020

this isn't a deep story. this isn't even really a massive super hit. but. it has a charm. the characters are fun. the scenes are fun. the system is fun. and isn't that all we really ask for in a story? something that is just fun?

4yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
queenV

After months of reading this novel it is by far one of my favorites. In love with all the characters, MC's girlfriend is my favorite though, and I like the interesting & unique storyline. Hopefully this novel will continue releasing more chapters!!

4yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
Weirdo

🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎄🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎆🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
DaoistWMspNj

Ficou muito bom, porém eu acho que ele poderia ter alguma besta divina Recém-nascido para nutri - la e quando a besta ele/ela crescesse pudesse ajudá-los em sua jornada para o pico do mundo ou do cultivo.

img
1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
cat_witha_nice_hat

one of the best novels I've read so far I hope to see more of this . filer*%/*!*/@*%#*/@*%@<%#&"@&%-&$-&"-&$'skgrzngsjgzjfsjvzjfxjgxjgx

3yr
Xem 2 lời trả lời
thegodfather

So i Guess i wasted my time? Reading the first two chaps with ranks and stuff. the thing that ruined It for me is her yep her Plus i feel like its just gunna get worse with 2 main charcters the author has to have Them grow from experince which would Mean double the work but then again what experinCes wOuld they grow from? I give up but yall check it out and see for yourself dont mind me.

3yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
ahmed_waleed_1200

Great job, hope you can write more chapters l, thanks for your hard working, keep on, 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 more chapters many thanks

4yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Gaming_noob_456

Read it,it gets really good..........................,.....................................................,,,,,,,...,........,..................

4yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Fantatic

Author after reading this story for some time now. I've seen you improve your writtinf skills. I am still enjoying your story and hope you release more soon.

4yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Charles_bice

Enjoying so far, like how the MC is OP as hell. GF needs a little love and development as well, hope that's in the story. I do like the plot and think it will get better, good job to the author.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
foxytail

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời

Tác giả Marchen