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A man in the midst of mighty beings!
4.1 (24 số lượng người đọc)
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(English is not my native language sorry in advance for all English teachers)
A strange purple colored person of unknown motive snapped his fingers announcing the start of a new story with the Tool User, Ayanokoji Kiyotaka of 'the class room of the elite' into the world Hight School DxD ...
But remembered one simple thing =) :
“All people are nothing but tools. It doesn't matter how it's done. It doesn't matter what needs to be sacrificed. In this world, winning is everything. As long as I win in the end...That's all that matters "Ayanokoji Kiyotaka
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4.1
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Writing Quality it is readable.... 4 stars Updating Stability ............. ........4 stars Story Development... very fast 2 stars Character Design.... It would have been better if you said he is an MC with Ayanokoji's body, because Ayanokoji thinks with his head before everything else. 1 star world background DxD has a vast universe for its development, the author of DxD himself has not known how to take advantage of it. 1 star I honestly liked the premise but the development went wrong, but I still know how difficult it is to write so I just try to give my opinion to help you improve dear author (I am not a native English speaker)
dont know how the story goes but I could never get into this as he is in a peerage and I hate when the mc is under someone's control because that is how every single peerage works
ok how did he get in to the hotel if he didn't have money?? pretty sure you need to pay first before you check in and no sane clerk will agreed to his deal thats just a major BS, also how come he's not notice when he's just sitting there in broad daylight tsk tsk, are you one of those author who tell the mc is smart and a manipulator when in truth you just made everyone else dumb, stupid, idiot no brain npc, p.s your naming sense sucks
Sigh, I just personally don't like it. There some stupid stuff, non-canon stuff. And it's just feels like the work from fanfiction. net. Semi-serious work, with 100 chapters of retailing original story with little new character development, and harem of 2 or 3....naaah, I'm not desperate enough.
This author said he is going to drop this novel so I have to give the worst negative review i can give to fail novels.
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
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Herem again😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
just wanted to know if he will ever be freed from being slave of rias (it's always a slave for me if the mc is in peerage) before reading this one ................................................................
hell yeah I love one piece fanfics and jojo too?! dam up the good work dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews.
became rias slave, mc personality changed, writing quality is meh, and hate how everything played out all in all, one star for this story, dropped
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amazing more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍👍👍👌👌👌😍😍👍👍😍😍👌👌😍
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Good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story good story
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The beginning of the story was kind of strange, but the story so far is going well. It has a lot of room to improve. I hope he stays with Rias, since he can put some reins in her. kkkkkk