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Gender Genesis: Chance in a different gender.
4.56 (14 số lượng người đọc)
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"No way, what happened to me?"
Harrishine Noel, a warrior from another universe has arrive in real earth (Our world) because she helped God's Angels. She changed her name to Harrison Shivel, a ordinary boy. Now, she must help God keep peace at Earth. With her new friends, Harrishine can't predict the problematica in the real earth. Can Harrishine keeps her promise to God and balance the peace on real earth?
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4.0/5 Definitely an interesting and weird (but in a good way!) story. It's fast-paced and the story develops quickly. Lots of action and mini-conflicts. There's some grammatical errors, however. For example, sometimes the story switches from past tense to present, then back again and so on. For a story told in third person like this one, I suggest keeping it in past tense, as that's what works best normally. I also would've loved to see Harrison try to adjust into his new gender, which I feel like should've happened. But other than that, keep it up, author! [img=recommend]
Honestly..? I really liked it. The pacing was fine and nothing seemed to be out of line. A good piece, overall, with the well-said descriptions and the well-rounded characters. Adding this to library for now...will check back soon!
gender bender concept is something I don't read but this story turned it around. If I must say this is my first time reading it and my goodness I do not regret it. Can't wait to see the characters develop like crazy. Though the writing has some grammatical errors, you can always ignore them to read a nice story. <3
For the plot is give this an A, as the Gender Bender wasn't uncommon but it is pretty scarce/rare. The whole thought, I get it, and I also like it. But the author should work on the grammar, punctuations proper adjectives, commas etcetera. Sure it is a tempting thing to use metaphors and speech tags, but use the appropriate ones. If that is fixed then your novel would improve by leap and bounds.🙂😶
gender bender???? I am in😊😊🤗🤗🤗 now time for real review😌😌 The synopsis ....did you look at it?? Wlep caught my attention☺☺And the story doenst disappoint 😁Give it a try...you won't regret 😊
5 stars for you Author. thank you for sharing and working hard writing this story to us. I was hooked by the first chapter. The was you describe your story is awesome. Keep it up.
wow! the plot is amazing, I like it. I was completely hooked reading the first chapter, the story development is really great. I can see the passion the author has put into this work. Keep it up dear author 👍
I loved the whole idea of your novel! I especially enjoyed how the story developed along with the unique characters. This story is definitely going into my to be read! Keep up the great work, Author!
What new and intriguing plot! hats of author....wow the plot is so thick, intriguing and new.. what a well built characters and plotline...just amazing.
The story is interesting and progresses nicely, but is hindered in quality by the large amount of grammatical errors. If these are taken care of, this story has a lot of potential to grow and become much better.
The author's way of writing is impressive, you explained things quite well in chapter one. However, I don't feel many emotions coming from Harrishine, I am sure this will improve gradually. I hope the author will make this a bit slow-paced explaining her feeling and the surrounding in much more detail. I love the characters themselves and their way of thinking. Can't wait for more chapters, best of luck.
The road of writing is paved with a lot of signs that says under construction, there will always be a room for improvement. Your idea is brilliant! Continue writing them! Along the way you will learn different writing techniques and styles until you'll pick the best suited trademark for your work. I added your story in my library to see the progress.
I love the characters [although I can't say I agree with their characters], and I do love the world background. But if I have to be harsh, the way the king speaks and the way Harrison speaks is a bit too... casual and unbefitting a subject. It just doesn't fit the mood; I would suggest the author to make the king's words more formal and Harrison's words and expressions more respectful. The author also has to watch out for improper word usage and grammatical errors i.e. tense errors. Otherwise, the plotline seems very sound thus far. Keep going, author!
4.8/5 The story has an interesting plot that seems related to classic isekai. There are some grammatical errors strewn throughout the story, but it doesn't hold back the novel too much. Will read!