Dragon Ball Saga: Conquest -REWRITTEN-

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Endless_Crow

Sup Folks! Author here. I wanted to know whether or not you all would like to read an alternate version of this work. I originally planned to have the MC wish to steal Frieza's body. I still like the idea, I want to know where I can take it. If you folks would want to read something like that, just like this review. Once we have about 50 likes, I will write a few chapters. If enough people like the alternate version, I will consider making it a new fanfic.

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LazyG0d

dude....pls tell me this is a no harem? _____________________________________________________________ _______________________________________

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IMPAiLER

Okay guys so this novel has been a pretty interesting read so far. Mc is clearly someone who plans is next move so there won't be much plotholes. The wishes he asked are pretty reasonable as well. It's nice to find that author didn't choose the already used up earth route and is choosing to explore the universe. In review I read about mc being arrogant and stupid or something along those lines well don't pay attention to that as well apparently author has done some editing and removing blooches so those negative points have been removed. Well I don't know what to say more other than give it a try. It's easily among one of my favorite dragon ball fan fics. And one of the only 3 empire building dragon ball fics i have read so far. I can just hope author keeps up his work, loving it so far. P.S. Just started reading this yesterday so i dont know about update stability so i just gave it 5 stars.

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Willian_Humildad

There is no character development in this story, you are too rushed and do not pay attention to the small details, there is not a decent description of his life on the vegeta planet, nor goals ... it would be to survive, the creation of your empire would be seen really forced, because as I tell you your MC is a shell you do not describe his personality or thoughts so it is difficult to know why he would make the decision to create his "empire" his hida to yardrat to learn something like teleportation without even handling the ki correctly ... your story is not good, lots of plot holes

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Evil_For_the_WIN

Review at chapter 15 Good points + His goal. It's new.(*********Spoiler: Would he become a useless king like the Galactic King *********) + Good writing. + Frequent updates Bad points - His stupidity in the first chapter that should have granted him an eternity in hell. - No tag saying it's an AU making me waste my time pointing out "inconsistencies". - Plot armor. Slightly stronger than Luffy's plot armor for now. - MC behavioral pattern is really weird. From idiot to psycho to weird student to wise planner to megalomaniac to eager learner all in less than 20 chapters. - The need to make him some kind of hero fighting evil. - He asked for technical skills. I thought he would create his own army of cyborg or reverse engineer the Ancient Saiyan but no he is recruiting I don't know who.

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Anbu310

Really loving so far and I hope the author does not drop it, it's good. And I hope it's not going to be those stories where the MC builds a massive harem

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Kyle_Simmons

good fanfic i don't really like empire building but still gonna read it. ........................................................................................................

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RenWoKuang1

Interesting so far, keep up the good work. Thank you for the chapter! ----------------------------------------------------------------------

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Unbothered_King

Everything is perfect atm since it’s only two chapters!!🎉🎉I’m acc really hoping you don’t give this up fr. Also, would Mc look like the cover pic.

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Sayajin12_87

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DaoistwwYBDC

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Ivan_778

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Theodoric_Jager

MMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!!!!

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Vento

Love the novel really good job.............. My is smart and actually using is brain give it a read if you like world building. More more more !!!!!!!

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MYUSERNAMES

Please, after you start new projects, do not hammer in this work. There are only two Dragon ball novels in my native language. Looking for novels in English, you are one of the last to continue writing novels in this universe

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Monster_Paradise

This is really good! I love the pacing and all. He made the right choice by going to Yardrat soon after to learn all about Ki. 👍👍 Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Bothstar

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NoHaremSectElder07

I like, I like a very much Borat Borat