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Tech Priest and Immortal
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Fan fiction is currently continued on royal road due to problems..... here's the link:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/41161/tech-priest-and-immortal
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The story itself is intriguing and the characters seem somewhat realistic. the first chapter didn't have that much of a hook other than a right hook if you know what I mean but after that I was drawn in. There are a few spelling mistakes through the first couple of chapters but it gets better as you go. all in all, the story has caught my attention and has me wanting more. keep up the good work.
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Shameless author here, I'll try to make one chap for each of my novels per day example 1 for this fic today and tommorow will be chap for the Project Tecnologicall Ascension, rinse and repeat got it? no? too bad