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Viết đánh giáI really do want to see creative the writer gets cause this one has a lot of potentials. can't wait to see how it develops. The twist is a nice touch. Looking forward to more chapters.
This is a really good piece, with alot of potential, the emotions put into it is catchy, coupled with the fact that it's just starting, i really love it, and can not wait to get the latest update on how the story goes,, waiting for the turn around on what Jay does next and how dele gets to help him with the nightmares. Waiting on your latest update
I am already cut up in the book I really hope I see more how Sharon moved him from a hard cold bastard to the sweetheart who was willing to propose and who could be seen crying I really can't wait for the next chapter author.... We are waiting
Great work of art, the story line amazing.Despite the fact it's just starting can already feel the connection in this whole work.cant wait for next chapter
New fresh cin alot of potential hopefully it wld become an adventure for us all,look deep making something out of nothing is a craft hoping you touch every part of there life
This is a really good piece, with alot of potential, the emotions put into it is catchy, coupled with the fact that it's just starting, i really love it, and can not wait to get the latest update on how the story goes,, waiting for the turn around on what Jay does next and how dele gets to help him with the nightmares. Waiting on your latest update. Thank you May_ Lion.
Nice one dear, I hope you improve more and more as the day goes by.It's a real nice step because as you are writing more chapters it's becoming more challenge, but what is fascinating is that there is improvement in every chapter you write that is to say the more chapter you write, the stronger you become.
It's an amazing, incredible and one of a kind book I've ever come across. It is well written and makes every reader craves to read more chapters of the novel. Keep the good job up miss Mary.
I feel this is about love and passion I can already imagine it in my head. This is a really nice book and I can't wait for it to continue. You all should read this book I strongly recommend it you won't be disappointed and I assure you that every chapter makes you yearn for another chapter
I'm sorry guys. I didn't abandon this book its just that I have a lot on my plate right now with the WSP Contest going on and my exams which are fast approaching. I just had to pause for a while but don't worry when I come back, I'll publish everyday.
Hmmm way to go girl just kip on keeping up the story is great just think of things we r not thinking of right now and introduce them to keep everyone on edge
Hmmmm another nice one just don't rush it was hearing back I will let him do it will take to get a new fresh air will let me know what to bring and time for us to come to your house to enter the least you would take to get a new fresh air
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You are amazing, impressive and extremely talented. This is so good I can't wait for chapter three. Go heroin you are another great female lead❤️❤️