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Shiro was a demi god, who had lived with human for 16 years. At the age of twelve he found out that he had powers. He one day found out that he wasn’t the only demi god. But there were millions of others in another world. He enrolled in a boarding house in that world and left his foster parent. He developed his power the more and at 16, he was a bronze ranked demi god.
He faced different battles and war, he was seen to be the one that will save his people but it all was the opposite.
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The idea on which the novel is based on is good. But the author has a lot of room for developments in other aspects. Hope u can improve urself author.
The writing definitely needs improvement as there were multiple basic grammar issues, and a piece of advice, refrain from long paragraphs as webnovel readers despise it. The content and plot is good and all, and I'm definitely looking forward to your work and improvement!
Good job!................................Improve in your beginning and story background...Keep it up....................................Amazing
Nice work dear.keep it up and work more on your character description....................................... ..................... Amaxing
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Good, keep it up! Work hard to achieve your goal! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Nice plot. But writing quality was something that was bothering me. So plz keep a check on grammatical errors and wrong Punctuations. Others u will surely improve. Cheer up nd work hard.